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    Live With A Passion New Member

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    Scarred by your confusion,

    internally marred by your lies.

    I'll fight, I wont go under

    as each part of me slowly dies.



    Ecstacy,

    Clear through your bright eyes.

    Wanting to touch you,

    failing all my tries.



    Sadistic was your treatment,

    unintentionally so.

    Left me hurt and lonely,

    without the hope to grow.



    Oblivious,

    you've left me here to die.

    You'll fade into the backround,

    ignoring my last cry.

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    liked this one as well its persepctive is unique, and its flow nice,
    some good word usage
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    Dear Live With A Passion,

    This poem, draws me in completely! I love the spacing in this as well, as it adds to the emotion radiating from this piece. Very well done. Thank you for sharing!

    Painted Diary aka Kimberly

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