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    Yea.. ehum, couldn't come up with a better name xD

    I know that I don't know

    I know how it feels to cry,
    so your whole body shakes.
    I know how it feels to try,
    knowing that you don't have what it takes.

    I know how it feels to be alone,
    without anyone to talk to.
    I know how it feels to have known,
    that someone doesn't mean it when they say "I love you".

    I know how it feels to smile,
    when all you really want is to cry.
    I know how it feels after a while,
    when you're telling lie after lie.

    I know how it feels to be left in the cold,
    when noone see's how you feel.
    I know how it feels to have your heart unfold,
    to be in love for real.

    But I don't know how it feels to be loved back,
    like I'm the best guy alive.
    I don't know how it feels to get on the right track,
    because I'm always on the wrong side.

    I don't know how it feels to really live my life,
    to have something going my way.
    I only know to keep away from the knife,
    and concentrating on getting through each day.


    Posted By Tanax | Dec 10, 2007
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    Dear TANAX,

    This is what really spoke to me because despite the experience you have the right mind to make the right decision. I took this a few ways also...the knife being symbolic for the hurt bestowed upon you and also not to hurt yourself or someone else. This is a very deep wounded poem and I hope that you recognize that you ARE one of the best guys alive above all, then for one day for someone to love you as one should be loved.

    Kim
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    This was heartwrenching ---- I read the 1st few stanzas and I want to share with you what someone shared with me when I posted on vB.com "I hate Celine ---- she's AWFUL!" :lol: ---- of course my reasons for posting were less than...............valiant...

    Jacquii.

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    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 11, 2007
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    Tanax Member

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    Thank you Kim!
    Yea, I hope that too.. some day, if it isn't too much to ask for =/

    Thank you Jacquii :)
    LOL, yea, I read your thread on vB.org ;)
    The music was actually good, and so was the text. But the singing part by her is a big uh-uh :p

    Don't like her xD But it was a nice share!
    THank you :)


    Posted By Tanax | Dec 11, 2007
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    Well well well, It ended right, at least. Classic Tanax. Poetry nobody else could have what it takes to write. :) Still in love with your poetry ;)


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | Dec 11, 2007
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    Dang I want to see what MS Jacquii wrote..... I happen to love Celine's voice :( but then again I have a wide wide range of music I love. Celine is just a drop in the ocean of all my loves. Anyways Tanax...... Beautiful strong write. I concur with everyone here ...You are the best alive. You have to believe it for yourself first hon.

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Dec 13, 2007
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    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 14, 2007
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