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    I Love You But It Hurts Me



    I love you but it hurts me so
    When I see you cry
    I wonder how I can bear this life
    And there's one thing I'd like you to know
    One day I'd like you to be my wife

    If I ever break your heart
    You can tear me through the ages
    For I have made the promise my intentions are pure
    And have written love poems on thousands of pages
    A woman of internal beauty has such a lure

    I love you but it hurts me
    To think I can't be as great as you are in my eyes
    And you know that I mean it and these are not lies
    That's just how well my sweetness you know me

    For the last brief year I have been lucky to know you
    But it's felt so long I wish I could show you
    To the one I love I give you the key to my heart
    For a lifetime I never want to be apart

    I love you but it hurts me whenever I leave your side
    To think that pain could come to you
    But from it we can't hide
    There is a light that I get from your soul
    In it I see eternity's love and truth
    With you I could walk the long mile


    Posted By TrueBlue | Jul 29, 2006
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    Dear True,
    This may be one of the greatest love poems I have had the pleasure to read. How lucky, the lady, of whom you scribe to! The length was just right. Kind of like, love will conquer all, do not stop believing in love. Yes, love is the liquified emotion that runs through our veins and fuels the heart. LOVED IT!!! 5STARS!!!!

    Painted!
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    Dear True,

    :wow: So beautiful, and I brought this back for all to enjoy once again. I do not want this to go unnoticed.


    {{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}:)

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