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    aliss163 New Member

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    You’re the first thing I think of
    Each morning when I rise.
    You’re the last thing I think of
    Each night when I close my eyes.

    You’re in each thought I have
    And every breath I take.
    My feelings are growing stronger
    With every move I make.

    I want to prove I love you
    But that’s the hardest part.
    So, I’m giving all I have to give
    To you … I give my heart.


    Posted By aliss163 | Aug 23, 2007
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Very nice Alissa, nice rhyming and smooth to read.

    :bowing:


    Posted By JolieH | Aug 23, 2007
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    Dear Alissa,

    Such a beautiful contribute to your brother. I am very sorry for your loss, and it is written with love as your ink. It is beautiful to read also the love you have for him. Perhaps this scribe is helping you with the healing. Thank you for sharing this.

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    You love your brother greatly, I can see that. I'm sorry for your loss...

    I'm sure your poem did justice to his memory :]

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    that was a beautiful way to honor your brother. i can't begin to imagine what you feel, but i still feel for you... and while nothing is never enough, this poem can be a starting point to a healing process after the loss of a family member or loved one..

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