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    zaac Banned

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    I Must Know Who You Are


    Your words sing the thoughts
    my dreams have long forgotten.
    I feel the stirrings of fires deep within,
    but I must know who you are.

    Heartstrings are best pulled gently,
    so remember you are on holy ground.
    I am wiser than the child I was.

    If you understand the things
    of which I speak,
    then you will already know
    that gentle is the soul of a poet,
    and deeper...deeper still.

    Take notice of the child smiling.
    You know i must defend him.
    But gently held like a bird in hand,
    he will sing to you forever,
    but I must know who you are.


    Posted By zaac | Feb 16, 2007
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    Jeez Banned

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    Jeez...

    That's hoo ' am. LOL.

    Nice write and very
    sensitive.

    Thanks for the
    read.


    Posted By Jeez | Feb 16, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Isaac,

    This was simply lovely. There is so much woven into the fabric of your poetic quilt here. This came from your abyss. Beautiful to read that you and she are getting to "know each other". Beautiful scribe poet.

    {{{{~~~***PD***~~~}}}}
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Gentle and yearning indeed...I second the motion, zaac - too many people keep their true selves hidden - thereby aborting the flow of trust and love. My soul has definitely sang this song before...and you have put it into words!

    I feel the stirrings of fires deep within,
    but I must know who you are.

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