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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Terence, Mar 17, 2008.



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    I Never


    I never thought I'd see the day
    someone like you would come my way.
    I was attracted from the start
    and very soon you won my heart

    I never knew a smile so sweet
    could sweep me off my steadfast feet,
    or eyes with soft and gentle gaze
    would set my empty heart ablaze.

    I never felt a love so strong
    that nothing ever could be wrong;
    a love that made up for the strife
    that has occurred throughout my life.

    I never have met anyone
    whose heart is big and, like the sun,
    can warm the coldest, wintry day
    and send dark clouds so far away.

    I never thought I’d touch the sky,
    but now I don’t ask myself why
    do I deserve a love like this -
    because you answer with your kiss.

    Forever I will let you know
    the reasons why I love you so -
    you are my heart, my life, my whole;
    you are the fabric of my soul.




    Posted By Terence | Mar 17, 2008
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    awww Terence ...... how sweet ...... this is a lovely tribute to love. Like the first love... so blissful. Thank you for sharing ..... this is a lovely read.

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Mar 17, 2008
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    Thank you so much, Mysty. It was too long for the Greeting Card section so I posted it here, lol. I'm pleased you liked it.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Mar 18, 2008
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    Ok, I sitting here thinking, "Awwwwww, so sweet! What a great idea for wedding vows, ok, kinda long for vows, but so beautiful."

    Terence, that is beautiful!!!!!!!
    hugs,
    Gail

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    That was so really loving that I am lost for words. It is like the words for a new found love after being heartbroken. Way to go!!! LOVED IT!!!

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    Thanks for the comments and hugs, Gail. Come to think of it, these could be wedding vows; far too late for me to use them though.


    Hi Racheul, thank you for those words, they accurately describe the feelings.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Mar 22, 2008
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