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    Mynd Rayne New Member

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    I Watch You
    by: Me


    I watch you
    As you watch me,
    I know you're thinking,
    "She's one of them, the different ones."
    Well, so what if i am?
    That doesn't mean you're better than me,
    That you should make fun of me,
    And look at me strangely.
    I am still human.
    I do still have feelings.
    Why take pleasure in my pain?
    Laugh at me,
    Til you make me cry?
    Why?
    Can't you be nice,
    Can't you be kind?
    Why hurt me soo?
    What makes it fun?
    Please tell me so I can know....


    Posted By Mynd Rayne | Dec 6, 2006
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    very nice, very nice,

    I found it intuitive and very spell-binding

    Benny New Member

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    wow...very forward and true for many...too true. If we could find what it is that makes some people find happiness in another's difficult situation...sighs. Great question for us all to ponder...along with many other ones. Thank you!


    Posted By Benny | Dec 6, 2006
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    lanaia74 New Member

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    Very creative and original! Totally AWESOME!:firedevil: :tybow: :eat:


    Posted By lanaia74 | Dec 7, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Many of us have felt these same sentiments that is in your poem MYND RAYNE ---- kewl name btw ---- Yeah - it's not always easy being the one that sticks out in a crowd...

    Anyway - I'm certainly glad you found poetry as a venue to put that frustration down...

    Nice write - Thanx for sharing it with us.
    And I noticed you haven't introduced yourself to the Community thus far - I hope you will -------> http://jpicforum.info/forumdisplay.php?f=9

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 7, 2006
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    sage New Member

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    this is an excellent "question" poem; it cuts to the core of the soul with exact moments of "why?" enjoyable read!:goodjob:


    Posted By sage | Dec 8, 2006
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