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    All of us have dreams
    All of us have dreams
    All of us have stories
    All of us have adventures
    Isn't it a lovely thing
    It is such a very lovely thing
    Show me you
    Show me home
    I will give you love
    That will make you cry
    Let us live
    Let love rule
    Dance into color
    Embrace
    Here we are
    So far from grace --
    Alive
    There is such majesty
    In you and I
    And this world
    Like the aftermath of a dream
    An ancient matter
    I'll look into your eyes
    I will touch your pretty head
    And bring you into my loving arms
    And caress you
    You who are my everything
    I love you
    You make me love to breathe

    And I will hold you strong


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    I really enjoyed this because it basically sums up how I feel about damn near every woman I come in contact with and sometimes it's hard to just say this because sometimes it isn't enough or you have the fear that the feeling isn't mutual and it could really hurt yo on the inside....almost makes a brother wanna cry, but nonetheless this poem is really beautiful....and thas real talk; Thank You


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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    An ancient matter
    I'll look into your eyes
    I will touch your pretty head
    And bring you into my loving arms
    And caress you


    Hey PAUL - what a lovely poem - it reads kinda as if a verse from the Bible... I like the simplicity of love that you offer with this write - I doesn't ask for anything in return. Possibly the TRUTH of unconditional love.

    I liked this poem - Thanx for sharing it!

    Jacquii.


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    Dear True,

    Glad to see you share yet another lovely poem with us. I always look forward to your work, as you are the "Master of the Poetry of Love" :give_heart2:. Fantabulous write!!

    Painted
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    Wonderful and moving....
    Therese

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