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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by JolieH, Jul 7, 2007.



    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    I wish we were barefoot
    - walking
    on the beach.
    I wish we could stand
    in the surf,
    water on our feet,
    touching,
    my hands on your face,
    your hands on my hair,
    kissing.
    I wish the moon
    was full;
    its light-up face,
    smiling,
    at our love.


    Posted By JolieH | Jul 7, 2007
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    Dear Jolie,

    This so sweet, and I felt the longing. To me, I think the mere touch of holding the face of the one you love in your hands speaks volumes. You are making me a bit misty here, as I am touched by this piece. I miss my honey also. Thank you for sharing this with us. I love the structure and the message it paints in all it's brevity. :bravothanx:

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