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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    if i were a poet
    i'd blend you within
    the earliest kisses
    of spring,
    where lilacs and roses
    intwined into love
    and dew drops
    forever will cling.

    if i were a poet
    i'd kidnap you
    and change all the stars
    into verses,
    collect your emotions,
    with meter and rhyme
    and sonnets
    my heart
    still rehearses.

    if i were a poet

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    Hi Sally,

    I'm not usually very effusive when responding but :wow: this is a really beautiful write. :wave:

    There are certainly no if's about you being a poet.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Jun 6, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Thank You Terence:

    I am honored by your words. It's poets like you and your comments that keep poets like me inspired to write.

    Thank You, Thank You. I'm greatly appreciated

    Blessings
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    Sally, if you were a poet, I'd lay bunches of roses at your feet...if you were a poet indeed...very funny...but airy and light...great beat.

    Nomad

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Bless you Nomad:

    Your comments are warm and sunny like the first morning sun on the forest floor. Thanks for the roses at my feet. I am truely grateful :)

    Blessings

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Sally,

    Well since you are a poet and I'm your friend I get to hang out in this poem. Delightful!

    Jerry:rolleyes:

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Thank You Dear Friend Jer:

    Your comments are worth a million smiles. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) ect.. ect.. ect..

    Blessings

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    Wow....this was an amazing read..I swear I'm batting 1000 today.. I truly believe the one who has created this "peace" right here is INDEED a poet..this was such a beautiful ode to poetry, love, and someone special...equivocal and yet direct all in one, yet never losing the softness in your words...this is beautiful

    "and change all the stars
    into verses,
    collect your emotions,
    with meter and rhyme
    and sonnets
    my heart
    still rehearses."


    Those were my favorite line....I'm in love with this "peace"

    Poetic Love to you because love of poetry is in you....
    Thanks so much for sharing this piece of art...definitely hanging this one on my heart


    Posted By ladylyric | Jun 20, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Thank You my dear Lady:

    Peace I give unto you. I love to bring out the beauty in my poetry that will make readers like yourself bring about loving smiles and warming hearts. Thank you for your most welcomed comment.


    Blessings

    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    If I were a poet
    I'ld send it back
    to you in ryhme
    but since I'm just
    an old sailor
    i'll put a message in
    a bottle and toss it adrift


    Already in my favorites my friend, you have remarkable talent!

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    its always clever when a poet steps outta their realm

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Thank you Kit:

    And I would wait on the shore until my message in the bottle comes floating to me. For your words would warm my heart when I need them most,
    oh dear sailor man.

    Dear Erik:
    I love to reach outside my realm of poetry.
    As you well know now from "Petals in the Wind" :)
    dear friend.

    Blessings
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Sally,

    I don't know how I missed this diamond. After reading this lil' masterpiece...I think I need to say "If I were a poet"! This shows the extraordinary talent you possess Sally and a range that has indeed reached the stars. Powerful in all its brevity and brilliant in its execution. Brilliant Sally...just fantabulous...and twas a pleasure to bring back!!!!!!!!! Love ya!

    Kim :)

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    yeah Sally I know and it usually just ends up being so fitting

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    And to you too, Dear Kim:


    To reach for the stars
    with my rhythum and rhyme.
    I am honored by your thoughful
    words every time.
    In your written works
    I have also admired
    It's friends like you too
    that keeps me inspired.

    Blessings

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    It's so great that I come back to an amazing poem :]
    I haven't been around lately, but I'm sooo glad I came back to read this one.
    It's very charming.
    Short but sweet.
    Loved it!

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Blessings to you Mango:

    How thoughtful and hearfelt your comment :)
    Indeed a pleasure to read your work as well.
    Thank you. my dear friend. :)

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    beautifully qritten my sweet wonderful poet you are very gifted and talented poet writer keep up the great work magnificent
    hugs kisses
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | Nov 30, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Blessings to you dear Honey Bear :)
    Thank you!

    And you too, keep up the superb writing yourself. For your words of romance and love sweep me off my feet and envelop my sences in a warm feeling like a fireplace does to ones cheeks in winter.

    Thanks again

    zaac Banned

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    this is quite stunning actually. i had to read it 5 times and found something different every time. i love this ethereal cerebral kind of writingl. i admire your writing very much. you have a feather touch and an inkwell full of love.

    zaac


    Posted By zaac | Dec 1, 2007
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