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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    ~IF TENDER LOVE SHALL EVER SHINE ON ME~

    If tender love shall ever shine on me
    as night enshrouds its cloak upon my sight.
    My lonely heart shall dance with joyous glee,
    for in her gentle arms she holds what’s right.

    It's heaven lone that holds perceptions key,
    and marches on through hatred’s wicked fight.
    Through depths of raging storm's enormity,
    at last my soul is sated by love's light.

    As heaven shines in her divinity,
    now fearless of love’s massive depth and height,
    Love pacifies my heart’s rude raging sea,
    encompassing me in your love so tight.

    As heaven shines her fervent light today,
    our endless love burns brighter every day.

    © Karen Davies


    Posted By Moonchild | Jul 30, 2007
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    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Karen,

    This is such a majestic piece. And in sonnet form as well. My Fav:

    thanks so much for sharing!

    Jerry


    Posted By Jer4clarity | Aug 1, 2007
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Yes Jerry Sonnet is a favorite form
    of mine too and I have several.
    I really enjoy them and I'm glad you enjoyed this one
    of mine, thank you much:hearts:


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 1, 2007
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    KayaOtah happy as ever

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    Nice work, my fav lines are



    Posted By KayaOtah | Aug 2, 2007
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thank you bunches Kayanta, I appreciate it :hi:


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 2, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    there's beauty in each stanza that you have written into this majestic sonnet Moonchild I love the image of fighting through all the storms of life as your soul is sated by heavens magnificent love
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Mar 27, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thanks a bunch Bear...glad you loved it*hugs and kisses*


    Posted By Moonchild | Mar 27, 2008
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    "As heaven shines her fervent light today,
    our endless love burns brighter every day."

    lovely sonnet k:clapping:


    Posted By solo | Mar 27, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    :thankyou: Solo*hugs*


    Posted By Moonchild | Mar 29, 2008
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    OH!! WOOOWWW!! Moonchild, this is a real Masterpiece and a fine work of Art.
    Thank you, Moonchild, for sharing your wonderful sonnet with us!!
    Cordially,
    Starry.:sign_thanks::yes:


    Posted By stardust | Apr 6, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thanks a bunch Stary...I'm so glad you liked it*hugs*
    This was one of my first Sonnets.


    Posted By Moonchild | Apr 6, 2008
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    Beautiful stuff, keep it up


    Posted By Eric | Apr 11, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thanks a bunch Eric :wub:


    Posted By Moonchild | Apr 12, 2008
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