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    "If you hurt me." (Poem-Song Lyrics only, no music). Author: Stardust. (11-12-2007).

    Refrain:
    If you hurt me, I won´t love you!!
    I don´t know why you feel the way you do.
    Let me tell you, dear!!
    If you hurt me, I won´t love you!!
    That will be a fact, and it´s so true.
    You reap what you sow, dear.

    Treat me well, love me tenderly,
    And I´ll love you in return.
    Building trust with a caring togetherness,
    And our love will always burn.

    Give me your time, I´ll give you mine.
    Show me you care and I´ll be there.
    That is what love is all about.
    Grant me all your smiles. Tears, I´m no longer bear.

    True love can´t be bought,
    For true love is given for free.
    Start feeling its wonders,
    Make it happen, let it be...
    So, only true love must be given for real!!

    You said you loved me. So, why you cruelly hurt me!!
    I don´t understand that kind of love.
    If someone so special truly cares,
    Will give his heart and time.
    The Lord is always watching from above.

    Refrain again...
    Author: Stardust. (Song-Lyrics only, no music, written by 11-12-2007).:giftrose::giftrose:


    Posted By stardust | Nov 17, 2007
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    mysticpoet729 The "Mystic" Poet

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    i like how you put this into song. i also like the message.
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much MysticPoet, for taking your precious time to read my lyrics and writing your lovely comments!! YES!! It is indeed, Song-Lyrics, and I convey a true message to the audience and readers. Although, I would need a good musician to put music into my words, if he or she is interested. You see, I am not a musician. I am only a Lyricist. I am sure, I´ll find someone out there, one day, who may use his/her talents -as a musician- to put music into my lyrics. I have written many Songs already. But, I do not post them as much. I usually post Poems and some Stories. Thank you, MysticPoet, for sharing your point of views with me!! I certainly appreciate your kindness.
    Sincerely, Starry.:tybow::tybow:


    Posted By stardust | Nov 21, 2007
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