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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    "If You Hurt Me..." (Poem/Song written by Stardust, on 11-12-2007).

    If you hurt me, I won´t love you!!
    I don´t know why you feel the way you do.
    Let me tell you, dear!!...
    You reap what you sow.
    If you hurt me, I won´t love you!!
    That will be a fact, and it´s so true.

    Treat me well, love me tenderly,
    And I´ll love you in return.
    Building trust with a caring togetherness,
    And our love will always burn.

    Give me your time, I´ll give you mine.
    Show me you care and I´ll be there.
    That is what love is all about.
    Grant me all your smiles.
    Tears, I am no longer bear.

    True love can´t be bought,
    For true love is given for free.
    Start feeling its wonders,
    Make it happen, let it be...
    So, only true love
    must be given for real!!

    You said you loved me.
    So, why you cruelly hurt me!!
    I don´t understand that kind of love.
    If someone so special truly cares,
    Will give his heart and time.
    The Lord is always watching from above.

    Author: Stardust. (11-12-2007).:grouphug:


    Posted By stardust | Feb 27, 2008
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Aww Miss Stardust.... this is a beautiful work.... but a bit of sadness at the ending because I am wondering who could hurt someone who loves like that?

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 27, 2008
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Dear Mysty:
    I am so grateful to you, sweetheart, for reading my work and offering your comments. You made my day, sweet Mysty!! I´ll satisfy your question about who could hurt somebody whom one´s love... It is a complex answer, but I´ll say it in brief: " A SADIST is one who loves to hurt, especially women." Of course, that is NOT TRUE LOVE. It is a sick person who pretends to show love, but it is plain sadism. I know, it is a sad poem-song. I usually write sad things. I´ll try to change that, I guess. Perhaps, one day, I will. Thank you, dear Mysty, for sharing your comments with me!! I love reading your poems and comments. God bless you, Mysty!!
    (((Hugs and Love))) Starry.:sun::sun:


    Posted By stardust | Feb 27, 2008
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