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    JONATHAN living not existing.

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    I was cheated on the brink of Nirvana,
    got conned by the big man above.
    Oh illusive, illusive, Nirvana!
    I got high on the road to Nirvana
    but somehow never quite got there.
    Oh distant, distant, Nirvana!

    I thought I once saw Nirvana
    in the inviting eyes of a girl.
    I felt I tasted Nirvana
    in between her fine long legs.
    I thought it entered within me
    when Maryjane kissed my lips.
    I felt it swim within me,
    moonshine coursing through my veins.

    But I was cheated on the brink of Nirvana,
    got conned by the big man above.
    Oh illusive, illusive, Nirvana!
    I got high on the road to Nirvana
    but somehow never quite got there.
    Oh distant, distant, Nirvana!

    Now I know
    there aint no Nirvana
    its just as dead as Kurt Cobain.
    I'm free falling into life now
    nothing to lose
    and just as little to gain.....


    Posted By JONATHAN | Sep 29, 2011
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    This poem makes me want to know Nirvana - Walk up to it and punch it in the fucking face for cheating you JONATHAN
    ((sigh...))

    There's some nice elements that make up this poem though - The above, one of those elements. Faux-nirvana coursing through your veins as if moonshine! I bet that felt like ecstasy......for only a moment.

    Here's wishing that such ecstasy when found - will not be that of the big man's con, but instead - a haven for lovers-two whose favorite past-time is gazing into each others eyes; best friends for life.

    J. (the moonshine maiden):drinks:
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    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Feb 21, 2013
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    Best friends for life? is that a proposal Ms J coz I think we are already half way there.
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    Posted By JONATHAN | Feb 22, 2013
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    Would it be too traditional if I got down on one knee and made that proposal to you Jon?! I wish I could.
    And yes - Best friends for life you and I. It's amazing what can be accomplished over a highspeed cable line eh? :friends:
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    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Feb 26, 2013
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    JONATHAN living not existing.

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    You know I love you dear friend n all the miles dont make it any lesser.


    Posted By JONATHAN | Feb 27, 2013
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