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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by tham, Feb 22, 2012.



    tham Member

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    Time in a bottle
    Ship in a bottle
    I was in a bottle
    But now I am free
    Time keeps slipping
    Time be tripping
    But time will never be
    Idle, Or set still for
    A moment, Like a
    Rope that's slipping free
    If we could grab that time
    And hold on tightly
    If we could use that time
    And not take it lightly
    Would that then set us free TMH 2/5/2012


    Posted By tham | Feb 22, 2012
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Very nicely done... clear and concise message. Smooth read, tham :) We do need to make much of our time... I think most of us, me included, wastes way too much of it.

    Nomad :beach:

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    Thank you for the read. If only we could, make a determined effort to use it wisely.There was a report on yahoo about time, if we really counted what we do and when, we have more time than we imagine.Again, thank you for the read.


    Posted By tham | Mar 1, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Last famous words of infamous genie in a bottle? lol - couldn't resist - but a very nice read. Enjoyed the rhythm of this piece. Thanks for the share :)

    J.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Mar 2, 2012
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    to be set free from time and let it be released

    is that what it says it wonderful


    Posted By Wind | Mar 12, 2012
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