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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by JolieH, Feb 2, 2008.



    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    The night burrows us
    into its time,
    a blurred path.
    A crickets chorus
    sings songs into the fabric
    of another bedtime tale.
    ~
    No fear the slip or laps of choice.
    It's only for a time.
    The people of the night
    as much of me as I of them.
    Shake their hand, a friendly offer
    to warm the chill of cold
    that burns their clenched lids.
    ~
    The dreams are secured.
    A flag on the moon,
    finds its place, like a smile
    of a Cheshire cat - floating,
    a puffed pillow traverse sphere.
    ~
    The crescent moon tucks into its den,
    a purring lioness kneads.
    Ardors of a roughened hide,
    at home in dreams, only a twitch.


    Posted By JolieH | Feb 2, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Strong and vivid images.
    I like what you did with this Jolie.
    It's very imaginative and inspiring.
    Keeps the mind reeling. Excellent write!:friends:


    Posted By Moonchild | Feb 4, 2008
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    Lovely, Jolie. Full of ingenious imagery and compelling thoughts.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Feb 4, 2008
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Ooh I agree....... I will be back to read this one over and over... Love it Jolie


    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 5, 2008
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