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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Struggling through the maelstrom
    that is within my mind.
    Indecision, I do not know what to do.

    Are my faculties fading?
    Have I reached a state of Dementia?
    I just do not know anymore.

    I cry in the dark
    where no one can see
    my tears.

    I am so tired., so sick of all
    the pain that attacks me
    from all corners of the universe.

    I feel it as it struggles to reach me
    and it does not lessen the closer it gets!
    God help me. Please?

    I cry in the dark
    where no one can see
    my tears.

    Trying to find the way out of the maze
    that is my mind and I am in the dark,
    going in circles I am sure.

    Still, I cry in the dark
    where no one can see
    my tears...


    In the dark.
    ©2012 Mysty Johnson


    Posted By Mysty | Oct 6, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    :wow: Oh my. What's going on with you Mysty that would inspire this write? It's heartbreaking. So many open & raw emotions - it's almost painful to read.

    I tell you though - it's been my experience that after a good cry, you can begin the healing process. Even if the process begins in the dark, the sun always rises. I hope that in writing this poem there's been a therapeutic healing process that has begun for you Mysty.

    J.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Oct 6, 2012
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    lol the poem was the product of not enough sleep and being alone when I least wanted to be alone. As I said in the msg I sent you for my bio. I literally am undergoing treatment for Depression. It creeps up on me at the oddest times. I am fighting it but it is a process. Thanks for reading and commenting though Ms J..... I truly appreciate any and all incite you give me : )


    Posted By Mysty | Oct 6, 2012
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