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    I sit beside you and watch you
    Tracing the lines of my hands
    And those around my eyes
    Stopping only to gaze past
    My furrowed brow
    Into the pools of my heart

    Oh, that you knew the depths
    to which they reach
    Fed by a spring eternal
    From my heart to yours
    So gently held as each tear
    That falls from your eyes

    I wish that I could understand
    How one so hardened by life as me
    Could ever deserve much less receive
    A crimson heart and crystal soul
    That only God himself could have shaped
    Into gold purified by laughter

    Child in my heart and of my soul
    My child who teaches me more than I could ever learn
    About trust and faith and how God must feel
    Every time he hears my cries
    And comes running to find me
    And holds me just as I do you…

    In the lines of my hands


    Posted By zaac | Nov 5, 2006
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    Dear Isaac,

    I read this like you are here, and I can almost "feel", what you are saying in this piece. I do not know how I missed this. This is very heartfelt, a message, and a cry for help is in this all wrapped up in one. The stanzas that I have quoted are exceptional. Thank you for sharing Isaac.

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    Gee Zack, I see you managed to squeeeeze a tiny bit of tenderness out of your heart!! Kudos!

    ha ha!...seriously though...this is really beautiful, tender, giving, protecting and thankful...all the things that makes a beautiful soul. [IMG]

    I guess somehow it found itself in YOUR body? Go figure!! (grin!)

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    yeah imagine that

    i keep that part of me very well protected, but it's bigger than you might imagine.

    zaac


    Posted By zaac | Jan 30, 2007
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    zaac, what a beautiful work...absolutely beautiful! Touching heart strings in anyone who reads these words...one complete portrait...take a bow. Just beautiful work!


    Posted By Benny | Jan 30, 2007
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    I doubt that...I have a HUGE imagination!!:tybow:

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