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    "In the Mood for Love." (Poem/Song-Lyrics only, no music) Author: Stardust. (6-09-2007).

    The setting at your nest...
    You like Champagne.
    How enchanting!!...
    I´d rather have white wine.
    Baby!! It´ll be just fine
    For you and I.

    You put music on...
    Jazz is your best choice.
    I said, "Baby!! -in a loud voice-
    Let´s listen to some good Blues."

    You held my hand
    And put your arms around me.
    We slowly walked to the balcony.
    We just swang under the Stars.

    It was on a Summer night,
    When we danced under the Moon.
    I smelt your sweet perfume.
    We were in the mood for love.

    Memories of those good old days,
    They seem now, so far away.
    We bathed in springwaters,
    And quenched the instincts to calm.
    We were always in the mood for love.

    Author: Stardust. (Song-Lyrics only, no music. Written 6-09-2007).:sax: :sax:


    Posted By stardust | Jun 13, 2007
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    Stardust floating around me!!!

    Stardust,

    This poem put that love mood right into context. Each line, each stanza, with such swift and pert stokes of muse, captured that moment that two share in unity. Great write! Great read!

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    We bathed in springwaters,
    And quenched the instincts to calm.
    Thanks for sharing!

    Jerry ;)
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    Dear Ms Starry,

    :wow: Lovely, simply lovely.....I can almost hear you singing to this lovely and enchanting melody! Love it!

    {{{~~~***PAINTED***~~~}}} :)
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    Dear Jerry and dear Ms. Painted, Kim: I am so sorry that I haven´t replied before. I apologyze...I am so busy lately...I am getting so much mail, plus all the other things I am involved with that, I just can´t handle it all at once...Thank you so much for your kind comments over my work!! YES!! I am trying to SING with a new melody and a new tune...I am only a DREAMER, you know that...God bless you always, my friends!! (((HUGS and LOVE))) Sincerely, Starry.:jump:


    Posted By stardust | Jul 9, 2007
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    TO MY SWEET DEAR FRIEND, TREE:
    You requested me to post some Song-Lyrics in the Love Forum, sweetheart, in order for you to read my lyrics. Well, I think, this one is nice lyrics for a perfect love song. However, it would need the MUSIC to become a SONG. I hope, you read it and offer your comments, sweetheart. Let me know what you say about it, dear Tree...(((HUGS and LOVE)))
    Fondly, Starry.:word_hello::thankyou::thankyou:


    Posted By stardust | Nov 17, 2007
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    Great read magnificent penning stardust
    hugs kisses
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | Nov 17, 2007
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Hello Bear!!
    Thank you so much for spending your precious time in reading my work and sending me your comments!! I do appreciate your kindness, Bear.
    (((HUGS))) Cheers, Starry.:giftrose::giftrose::)


    Posted By stardust | Nov 18, 2007
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