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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by lanaia74, Nov 19, 2006.



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    I can still hear those chilling words"Women and children first"
    This was the first boat ride I ever took
    I had to make my presence known to feed my unquenchable thirst
    People think our existence only comes from a book.

    Everyone thinks it's far fetched we really exist
    Not able to conceive vampires are real
    Under the spell of a vampire you just can't resist
    Melting into a vampire's arms, submitting to our very will.

    At first on this voyage my victims were easy
    No one ever thinking something horrible like me is real
    Taking what I needed here was very very easy
    No one had any idea the likes of me they would have to deal.

    Especially at night my victims were easy to steal
    Usually at night it is very foggy making it hard to see
    To sustain my life I really hate to kill
    But I'm greedy, I will try and survive any way I can, see.

    On this ship about ten souls were inducted into the undead
    You thought if you evacuated the ship it would stop my murderous intent
    Evacuating the ship my thirst could not be fed
    We were to close to shore, putting into their plans a little dent.


    Posted By lanaia74 | Nov 19, 2006
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    great read, good sense of story and detail :bravo:


    Posted By Echoes | Nov 19, 2006
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