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    Yuk! I have to walk past that gloomy house as I have wandered off the path
    Each time I see this place it's as if it takes my very breathe
    The hearsay of this place is so horrid at it I have to laugh
    Some say going inside this place has made some people take their last breathe.

    I even think there is a family plot in the back yard
    Generations of those that used to live here
    As I walk by I must be on my very up most guard
    Trying to remain logical with all these feelings of fear.

    I hate walking by here especially at night
    I am so afraid I feel the darkness of night is actually smothering me
    I must convince myself everything is all right
    I must control my nerves and get hold of myself, see.

    I hasten my pace because I am directly in front of the house
    Seeing in one of the windows some sort of light
    Curiosity getting the best of me, I walk up to the house trying to be as quiet as a mouse
    Looking in the window what I see fills me with intense fright.

    A transparent woman in white staring back at me
    She reaches out to me as is saying help me please
    This is my interpretation of what she does, see
    As if she is saying" Help me find peace."


    Posted By lanaia74 | Jan 28, 2007
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    Scary painting you have put on this canvas...I enjoyed this one very much!


    Posted By Benny | Jan 28, 2007
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