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    This is a collab between Benny and I. Can you tell who wrote what?! Enjoy!


    Intimate Prelude

    They sing for touch, rising to my exhale;
    orchestrated silence, measured for now.
    The dewy scent that I inhale ignites
    a passion that I can't, just yet, allow.

    Fingers strum slow, strings of lust thoughts;
    melodies dance under coveted skin.
    Tingles begin to radiate
    upward and down, stirring the heat within

    Skin slick, as desire melds our needs as one,
    drunk from drinking earthy delights,
    we rise and fall, floating on the heat waves of
    rampant urge, we reach for new heights.


    Posted By Altree94 | May 18, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    very nice!
    And....I'm bad at guessing........so I'd better not...
    but very intimate collaboration.


    Hmm.
    this one THIS time is about the special relationship between two people undressed, correct?
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Hey Ms Tree and Benny :giftrose:!!!! This is FANTABULOUS and SCRUMPSHALICIOS!!! Where is that damn towel!!! :heat::wow::wow: The collaboration of words are spot on, and brilliantly executed! Sexy, saucy, classy, lustfully, crave-able, sensuous, silky, and totally beautiful!!! Did you guys do line for line? I cannot tell right now, who wrote what! All I know, is that Isaac better get here quick! LOL Loved this guys! That first stanza got me goin from the beginning, and my thoughts went straight to.....well anyway....you get what I am saying! Gave this an excellent rating!

    {{{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}};)2 :heat:

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    TY Ladies!
    Mango - where do you get "undressed" from? Where is your mind at, girlfriend??!! This is all about music!

    PD - Must be a good one if you can't tell who wrote what! and BTW - I think Jeez has all of the towels! LOL!

    Thanks again!
    - Tree.
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    Thank you also to Benny for letting me write with him. We sure had fun doing it! Writing, that is - just writing! LOL!


    Posted By Altree94 | May 18, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    oh my poor brain!
    don't leave my brain to go trying to decipher stuff at 11 at night....

    the little demons come out to play....

    but still nice poem nonetheless :]

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    Well..... yous two have
    made a very sensuous
    write here.

    You and Benny have
    a complimentary style.

    Very good the both
    of yous, enoyed it
    immensely. :popcorn:

    :yay: :ss-wink:


    Posted By Jeez | May 18, 2007
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    Altree94 VIP Member

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    That's cute, Blue Mango YoYo Puppy!
    Thank you Jeez!
    I thought it needed one more verse but Benny, (typical male) was done! LOL!
    Ah well, 'twas fun while it lasted!
    - Tree.


    Posted By Altree94 | May 20, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    such elegant beauty in a sensual write excellently done beautifully written Ms tree and benny
    handshakes and hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | May 20, 2007
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    Beautiful melding of two intellectual minds reaching beyond the flesh. A sensual dance that tangoes the reader right into place as the music crescendoes. Thank You for an awesome read Tree and Benny. You two dance beautifully together.

    ~Mysty~


    Posted By Mysty | May 20, 2007
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    AWESOME - what an exquisite Collabo BENNY AND TREE! And no- I couldn't tell where Benny's line ended and yours began & vice v... Which makes it all the more exquisite - YAWL really had your thoughts synonymous (sp?) with each other.

    A very nice prelude of inimacy :p --- I do wonder is there more to come? You two have certainly piqued my interest, as this is really a lovely lovely collaborative effort!

    Congrats & Thanx for the sharing!

    Jacquii.

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    WOW - TY for all the great comments!

    Jeez - that is high praise indeed - especially coming from such a sensual writer as you! TY!

    Bear - hmmm - hugs and kisses for Benny and I get a handshake? Whazzup with that?! Is there something you're not telling us??!! LOL! Just teasing you - no need to go grizzly! Glad you enjoyed the write!

    Mysty - You even make your comments read like poetry! KEWL!

    MsJ: If we can ever get Benny's butt back in here, there just may be more to come! On the other hand, if he is on a roll with his next books - we don't want to disturb him!

    Thanks again, everyone!

    - Tree.


    Posted By Altree94 | Aug 2, 2007
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