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    Zeblon New Member

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    Everyone calls me Zeb

    Wisdom

    (zeblonian acrostic haiku)



    Zephyr of silken
    Energetic harmonies,
    Blowing wild wisdom



    Warren Zeblon Gill

    Copyright ©2006 Warren Zeblon
    Gill


    Posted By Zeblon | Nov 16, 2006
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    alanmdouglas ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty

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    PERIPATETIC POET

    Nothing daunted
    Our poet
    Manages to write
    And rhyme
    Despite a life wandering
    In a multitude of byways.

    :jpicrocks:

    Come, peripatetic poet
    Reach this destination
    Hurry home
    You are sorely
    Missed by
    Everyone who
    Reads you!

    Alan McAlpine Douglas

    Altree94 VIP Member

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    TY to Starry, Zeb and Alan! My apologies also for not replying sooner but have have been down with the flu for the last two weeks.

    Starry: For a first acrostic or a 100th acrostic - this turned out beautiful! It is really hard to get emotion into one of these and yet your love for Cindy comes shining through! Well done!

    Zeb: an acrostic AND a haiku?!!?!!! That is absolutely amazing! Your haiku is perfect in every way and it still meets all the game requirements! What a beautiful way to describe yourself!

    Alan: Yes, I too would like to hear from NomadicRhymer AND I would also like to see what YOU can come up with to describe YOU! Here's a challenge: try using GRUMPS!

    Thankyou all again! I am just in awe of the quality of all the replies! We really do have some talented people here!

    :jpicrocks:


    Posted By Altree94 | Nov 19, 2006
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    alanmdouglas ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty

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    GRUMPS' EXCUSE

    Gorgeous, I certainly ain't
    Ruffled, I easily am
    Umbrage taken, my speciality
    Moaning, my whole life
    Pernickity, no problem
    Soulful, ah, excuses all the above ....


    Love
    Alan

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    LOL!
    Alan, I LOVE this! I don't believe a word of it, but I love it!
    Challenge met in style!


    Posted By Altree94 | Nov 20, 2006
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    Nice Intros Everyone!!!

    Painted
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    HI EVERYBODY!! I´ll post some Acrostics soon. Thank you for replying to me!! Hugs. Stardust.:artist:


    Posted By stardust | Nov 22, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Languishingly
    Omnipotent.
    Yearning years of
    All-gone turmoils
    Lingering like yesteryears' dream

    Righteously
    Omnipotent.
    Yawning years of
    All-out hatefully haughty
    Laughter

    Just
    Poignantly
    Ignorant
    Cunning.
    Adonis of Grecian urn
    Naughtily nods to Jacquii Cooke. :girl-LOL:

    Altree94 VIP Member

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    Love it, MsJ! You have outdone yourself, you Loyal Royal JPican!


    Posted By Altree94 | Nov 23, 2006
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Misty morning breeze inspires my poetical views,
    On any soil or ground I may stand,
    Never forgetting the sweet fairies and stars above,
    In a never ending writing of my hand.
    Calming and uplifting spirits, I may always be,
    At any place giving a New Birth to the Land.

    Acrostic: MONICA:artist:


    Posted By stardust | Nov 23, 2006
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    Amzy A friend, Well met.

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    Excellent, Stardust! This puts an end to your claims of not being good at acrostics.


    Posted By Amzy | Nov 23, 2006
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    HI AMZY!! Thank you for your kind words to me!! I certainly appreciate your gentleness!! Hugs and Love, from Stardust.:acute:


    Posted By stardust | Nov 23, 2006
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    Starry!
    That was beautiful and so very well done! I knew you could do it! Now that you have the hang of it, how about trying one for your favorite pet? (sorry, Paul does not count as a pet!) LOL! Have fun with it!


    Posted By Altree94 | Nov 24, 2006
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    Altree94 VIP Member

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    My Dog.

    This is for my big black lab - BUBBA.

    Big - 130 pounds and still growing (wider).
    Ungainly - he runs into walls.
    Black - but now has a lot of grey.(like me).
    Beloved - most definitely!
    Aged - almost 104 dog years.

    Here is a picture of my big suckie baby:

    Attached Files:



    Posted By Altree94 | Nov 24, 2006
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    ~Serenity~ ~Pixie Princess~

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    Awww hehe it's Bubba in a heartbeat. Running into walls - I can picture that!

    Altree94 VIP Member

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    TY, Sweetie! He really is a big baby isn't he?! He gets more and more like your Uncle Big AL every day! LOL!


    Posted By Altree94 | Nov 24, 2006
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    HI SWEET TREE!! WOW!!...You have just touched my heart (with the picture of your precious dog), and made me cry a storm of tears. Now, I remember my pets, who are gone to Heaven. I have such a special heart for ANIMALS. I love your dog BUBBA!! It´s so BEAUTIFUL!! It´s so LOVELY!! One day in the future, when I move back to the States and buy MY OWN HOUSE, I shall get a LABRADOR DOG for myself. I love LABRADOR DOGS!! Well, as a matter of fact, I love ALL ANIMALS!! It is difficult for me to choose among so many cats I have and I used to have. My favourite cats have passed away. They were SIAMESE FEMALES CATS. Their names were: DAISY and BLUEBERRY. Daisy was my first female Siamese cat. Blueberry was her daughter, and I kept her. Daisy died at the age of 10. Blueberry parted at the age of 12, last year in September 2005, over a year ago. Daisy parted in August 2001, a few days before the Terrorist Attack at the World Trade Center ( the Twin Towers). I used to work in that area for so many years. I am glad that I was out!!. Otherwise, I would not be around here telling this Tale...I´ll try ACROSTICS with MY PETS´ NAMES. However, let me write them first. Then, I´ll Post them in here. I haven´t written anything lately, sweetheart Tree...
    OK!! Take care, sweetie!! See you soon!!...Love. Sincerely, Stardust.:artist:


    Posted By stardust | Nov 25, 2006
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    [Beautiful+Danger] Devious

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    Beautiful Danger

    Brought forth are pains which delve inside my
    Empty heart and cause me grief,
    Alone i feel and lonely too,
    Unwilling to forget you, love.
    This life of mine knows only regret
    Inside my mind i weep
    For all i cannot keep.
    Unable to recede from this
    Life of unbearable guilt.

    Down and scared, my troubles deep,
    Another night i cannot sleep.
    Nightly worries i scribe for thee, and
    Greatly appreciated are the compliments which
    Every one of my JPiC friends
    Return to me about my written defeats.
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    HELLO BEAUTIFUL!! It´s so wonderful what you have written. It shows that you are indeed, a great Poet. Please, keep them coming from your heart of hearts!! It´s lovely!! Good Job!! Sincerely, Stardust.:serenade:


    Posted By stardust | Nov 26, 2006
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    Hello Beauty!
    I gotta agree with Starry about your acrostic! It starts so sad and down but then ends on an upbeat, I like that! Good job, poet friend! TY for posting!


    Posted By Altree94 | Nov 26, 2006
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