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    HI DEAR SWEET TREE!! Thank you for your good advice, comments and kind reply to me!! Your suggestions are GREAT!! Although, my Acrostic called "AMAZONE", is a MESSAGE to ALL of YOU, plus it is TRUE!! I´ll soon go to the AMAZONE RAINFOREST, as an EXPLORER, with a lovely GROUP OF EXPLORERS. I´ll call My Novel: "AMAZONE." I´ll try to sell it to Hollywood Producers, since it´ll be a BEST SELLER for sure!! Of course, I should begin to write it, though. Moreover, I should go there first, to EXPLORE the Area with the rest of the Group of Explorers, who are doing the same things, just like me. We´ll be Exploring New Territories with primitive kind of living species, like humans living in a Cave Age. The primitive tribes there have a weird and strange way of living. This is what we (as Explorers) are looking for, to investigate their lives and way of living. I´ll be gone soon!!...I hope and Pray to come back ALIVE!! It is going to be a Dangerous Journey for me and for the whole group!! This folks have strange primitive habits. God will be with me, I know!! God Have Mercy!! Anyway, I am not afraid to die...Bye for now!! Wish me Luck!! I´ll write a little more, before I go...Hugs and Love, Stardust.:giftrose: :giftrose:


    Posted By stardust | Dec 3, 2006
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    HI DEAR TREE!! I won´t go there, until after the HOLIDAYS...MERRY CHRISTMAS and a HAPPY NEW YEAR 2007 to you all!! Hugs and Love, from Stardust.:girltender: :girltender:


    Posted By stardust | Dec 4, 2006
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    Altree94 VIP Member

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    LOL @ Alan! You simply cannot resist a challenge, can you!?!!
    Wonder if zaac has seen it yet? He seems to be having a difficut time finding his way around in here.
    But Alan - you have written these for a lot of others but not one for me! I would surely like to see one done with my Mohawk name which is Otsitsia! Now THERE is a challenge wothy of your talents!

    TY Starry and the same good wishes to you too! I am eagerly awaiting your next acrostic! BTW - You still have not done PAUL!


    Posted By Altree94 | Dec 6, 2006
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    alanmdouglas ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty

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    Dear Tree,

    While I am very willing to accept your challenge, I am also aware that you may have traditions or ideas with which I am not familiar, so I might be writing something I think appropriate, which for you is the greatest insult I could offer.

    If that IS the case, you need merely educate me, and I will alter/amend/delete !

    Here :

    OTSITSIA

    Overhead the sky
    Trees surround me, I
    Shout, for I am free
    In tune with nature
    The seasons.
    Skonnakowa
    I wish for all, excepting
    Any who would cross my tribe ....

    Alan

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    Simply beautiful, Alan! I love it and it suits me to a T!

    :word_thankyou:


    Posted By Altree94 | Dec 6, 2006
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    Dear Alan: Your Acrostic for Ms. Tree is absolutelly beautiful!! I love it!!...
    Dear Tree: You asked me to write an Acrostic with my hubby´s name. OK!! I could write many sort of things about him. However, they might not be appropiate for the Forum. So, I shall try something a little easy...: "PAUL".

    Paul loves women. He had many of them...
    Astonished I am at his weird skills!!
    Unpredictable kind of man, I´d never know what he´ll do.
    Love lots, he needs to exist.

    OK!! My dear Tree: It is done!! I have finished writing it. It took me just a few minutes doing it... You see, dear, I am going away AFTER the HOLIDAYS.
    Paul is ON VACATIONS. He will still have more to come, since he has so much VACATION TIME accumulated, over 3 months or so...Paul uses it during the SUMMER TIME in our foot of South America, where we presently live. SEASONS are different here, than in North America or Europe. We live under different TIME ZONE and different SEASON ZONE. I am OK!! Remember me: I am a pretty good writer. I always try to Hunt for Good Stories to write about. HAPPY HOLIDAYS, dear sweet Tree!! Hugs and Love. Sincerely, Stardust.:yay: :yay:


    Posted By stardust | Dec 6, 2006
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    H andsome to some
    A morous in the mornings
    R rich on payday
    R owdy on weekends
    Y earning for life and love


    not much of an acrostic, but I tried :no:


    Posted By Harry | Dec 6, 2006
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    alanmdouglas ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty

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    Dear Harry,

    I disagree, this is a good acrostic.

    Also, my wife wants to meet you ....

    Love
    Alan:damn::flipoff:
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    Beautiful Intro for Ms Tree Alan!!!

    Harry.....that was fantabulous!!!!

    Ms Stardust...your posts are wonderful!!

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    LOL! LOL! LOL!
    This game is really heating up!
    Harry - I Love it!
    Alan - After your wife meets Harry - can I meet you???!!!!
    Starry - EXCELLENT acrostic my friend! See how nicely they work out with the shorter lines? Very well done, indeed!
    PD - Did you see the challenge I left for you in one of my other replies? hmmm must not have. I shall have to PM you!


    Posted By Altree94 | Dec 6, 2006
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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    great job, Harry:bravo:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 7, 2006
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    Ok...Allan thanks for the beautiful Acrostic...it was awesome!! I will write mine with my real name since I certainly can't compete with that one...Thanks!!
    Tender loving tempestuous soul
    Harboring ideas that real love still exists
    Editing...always editing
    Rowdy when dancing reggae
    Ever-increasing circle of friends
    Sensitively knowing when to talk and when to shup up
    Easy-going but like a dog with a bone, I never give up!

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    Beautiful, Therese! Loved that "editing .. always editing" line! Sure can relate to THAT! LOL! TY for posting!


    Posted By Altree94 | Dec 7, 2006
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    Alan, Tree, Painted and Lisa:thanx:


    Posted By Harry | Dec 7, 2006
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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    Efforts to believe in myself
    Choked by a
    Hollow soul struggling for breath
    Opaque darkness covers me
    Empty void
    Silent voice


    Lost inside a vacuous mind
    Insufferable pain
    Swallowing me whole, leaving me
    Alone


    thanks to Harry for encouraging me to try this:D


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 7, 2006
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    alanmdouglas ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty

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    Dear Tree,

    I have to say I felt very honoured to be asked to write a acrostic based on your Mohawk name ! Humbled, really, and I am so pleased you like it.

    Harry has not yet offered to meet my wife, so maybe his acrostic was a little boastful ? LOL, we will probably never know !

    But I would love to meet you. I used to go to the USA, but have not been in a while - do you come over here ?

    Love
    Alan

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    Dear Lisa,

    I want to respond to your acrostic, but I have a problem : Is that YOU in the video clip ? I find it rather ... dis ... tract ... ing .... ! Somebody told me I was 65 the other day, I do not believe a word of that !

    Love
    Alan

    PS I do havea some serious points to make, but I want to know who/what I am addressing without my damned intruding preconceptions !

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    Hi Alan,:wavey:

    no that is not me, in the video, I wish:toot:

    It is one of the avatars from the site, in the animated section

    I look forward to your comments:peace:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 7, 2006
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    Hey Lisa:wavey:

    I like your acrostic, it is written with much depth and insight and much emotion:give_heart2:

    glad you tried it:huggles:


    Posted By Harry | Dec 7, 2006
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    Harry New Member

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    Hey Alan.

    there is no boasting here, just ask my wife and a few other ladies:onthequiet:


    Posted By Harry | Dec 7, 2006
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