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    alanmdouglas ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty

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    Boast - no way

    Dear Harry,

    LOL, I guessed that, but you had not responded, so I thought a tease in order !

    Love
    Alan

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    yeah I know Alan I was :sign_justteasing:

    and was honey if you are reading this, I was kidding about the other ladies, I am a one woman man:smokin:


    Posted By Harry | Dec 7, 2006
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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    many thanks, Harrry;) :bye:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 7, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Fabulous intros EVERYONE - I shall endeavor to write another when completely and totally enibriated :p -----> I'm just thinking to myself - I'm sure glad this is a Community of sharing, as how the hell would I compete with all of THAT!?!?

    AWESOME Stuff YAWL! The talent grows.................................... :cheers:

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 7, 2006
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    Fantabulous Acrostic Introductions Everyone!!! Harry, Beautiful + Danger, Therese, Alan, Ms Jacquii, Echoes, Starry, Gemini, and etc.....

    I am jealous Alan, LOL ....how come you did not write one for Painted Diary?
    Am I not worthy of an acrostic? j / k ;)

    Ms Tree, I did see the challenge about writing one for Zaac...workin on it. ;)

    Painted

    alanmdouglas ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty

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    WHO ?

    Perhaps she is not
    All that she pretends to be ?
    In hiding, nameless, mysterious !
    No clue, as to who
    This lady is
    Except one.
    Dedicated to her Painted
    Diary, her works of art,
    Incandescent in display,
    Artless in her straightforwardness,
    Really one hell of a being - say, is that
    You ?

    Love
    Alan

    alanmdouglas ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty

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    Dear Lisa,

    Should I say I wish too ? LOL. What an extraordinarily bouncy young lady !

    Anyway, I have rewritten your acrostic :

    THE TRUTH OF BEAUTY

    Efforts to believe in myself are
    Choked by a
    Hesitant soul struggling for breath
    Only not realising how
    Exceptional
    She really is ....

    Lost inside a web of self-made lies
    In pain which would be erased by the truth
    Swallowing others' low esteem
    A lady of worth who has not realised it ... yet ....

    Love
    Alan

    PS If this offends you, you may ask me to remove it and never darken your door again !
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    Dear Alan,

    That was simply beautiful.....I thank you so much. You are effortless in your words and execution. I have said many, many times that I hope to be able to write on that level one day. This warms my heart, and put a huge smile on my face. LOL, I finally posted my picture, as I was in hiding for a long time. Hope you can look at my picture, and see the fantabulous smile you just put on it!!! Thank you so much.

    Love,

    Painted ;) :)

    alanmdouglas ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty

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    Dear Kim,

    Funny thing about the truth - accepting it makes one feel GOOD ! A simple test of any opinion one has of oneself is - does this make me feel good or bad - the TRUTH always makes one feel good, telling oneself lies makes one feel bad.

    If my version put that smile on your face, tell me, did your version do that too ? Thus you see the truth in what I am saying.

    As to my writing, thank you, been there a long time now. But here is another truth - if you can receive it (ie like some one else's art, then by definition, one can also put it out ! A bit like "It takes one to know one" !

    Now, WHERE is that pic ? I tried your profile, but saw only Escher - where is your pic hiding ?

    Love
    Alan
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    Dear Alan,

    LOL...My picture is on page 12 or 13 of the "Face Of The Artist" Forum in the Chat Room. I just love you.....

    Painted
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    Alan...indeed very effortlessly...your fingers are blessed. Of course and quick and brilliant mind doesn't hurt either!! Wonderful acrostics for Painted and Echoes...

    I did another one for myself...more of the truth...:violin:

    Truth be told, she ruthlessly
    Hides from the world, behind computers
    Effortlessly bypassing those who seek to come
    Rushing into her life…as the mirrored doorway
    Evaporates she burrows deeper, never surfacing
    Soothing herself with books and verse
    Effervescent spirit hidden from everyone

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    LOL! @ ALL of you!

    LISA: WONDERFUL acrostic!!!!! Now that we know just how good you are at them - maybe we can coax you to write a few more? You can introduce anyone you want here - your pets, your family - heck, Starry even introduced her book!
    BTW - after seeing your acrostic, I cannot agree with your line about a "vacuous mind"!

    HARRY: I thank you also for encouraging Lisa to try this!

    ALAN: This is NO place for protruding preconceptions! LOL!


    Posted By Altree94 | Dec 7, 2006
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    alanmdouglas ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty

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    Dear Terese and T-rees,

    Th, thank you !

    T- So where IS that place ? Which forum ?

    Love
    Alan
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    HI DEAR TREE!! Thank you for your moral support and for your nice words of encouragement!! I like your ways, girl!! You see, I call My Novel: "Memories of a Woman." The "Amazone" is just another Story...I also have My Poetry stored in a book, which I call: "Poems and Meditations." I also have a Mystery Story, which I call: "Sleeping with the Enemy." Hugs and Love. Sincerely, Stardust.:sun: :sun:


    Posted By stardust | Dec 7, 2006
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    Dear Alan, why would this offend me? It is simply beautiful. I will tresure it always. Thank you so much for seeing in me what I cannot:huggles:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 7, 2006
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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    thanks so much Tree. I really appreciate your kind thoughts:huggles: I just may try my hand at some more :yes3:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 7, 2006
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    thanks Kim:huggles:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 7, 2006
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    alanmdouglas ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty

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    Dear Lisa,

    " Dear Alan, why would this offend me?"

    - I did not really expect it to offend you, but in personal areas some peeps can be sooooo touchy - I find it best to offer to withdraw, cuz I would not want to impose my view of themselves on anyone, no matter how nice !

    As to whether you "cannot" - you now have the clue - the truth makes you smile, feel good, lies bring you down, cuz they conflict with the truth one knows to be true inside.

    So if ever you feel down, just ask yourself "Have I told myself some lies ?"

    Love
    Alan

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    I've never written an acrostic, but here goes:

    Me?
    I'm not here; I'm that
    Cat curled up on the sofa, that
    Hunter who can't squeeze the trigger,
    Another blunder made right by the
    Ebb of tides and
    Long moonlit nights.


    I was going to do my last name too, but that would be a mouthful lol.


    Posted By mbironneau | Dec 8, 2006
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    Alan,

    that is such great advice to Lisa, hope she listens to you :friends:


    good job Michael:bravo:


    Posted By Harry | Dec 8, 2006

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