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    alanmdouglas ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty

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    Me?
    I'm not here; I'm that
    Cat curled up on the sofa, that
    Hunter who can't squeeze the trigger,
    Another blunder made right by the
    Ebb of tides and
    Long moonlit nights.


    But there
    Is a downside :
    Real person
    Outrageous poet
    Not for the faint-hearted
    Never giving up
    Extending
    A welcome to
    U, and U and U ....

    How's that ?

    Love
    Alan

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    :bowing: You make it all seem so easy, Alan... All the same, I wish I'd thought of this first lol.

    Thanks, Harry. I didn't see your acrostic anywhere. Did you post one?
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    That is a great acrostic by Alan, Michael.......;)

    Painted

    P.S. Yes, Alan makes it seem effortless!!!

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    Yep, it's impressive. I couldn't get past the "NN" in my last name so I only posted MICHAEL, but Alan just has a way with words...

    alanmdouglas ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty

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    Dear Michael,

    Thank you, but really, using NOT and NEVER hardly took much skill, lol.

    I have done a lot of these.

    Love
    Alan

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    :blush2: OK, maybe you do have a point, lol. Practice makes perfect!
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    HI TREE!! HI ALAN!! Thank you for YOUR WISE ADVICE TO SOME PEOPLE HERE, AT THIS FORUM!!...I am a Chistian Woman with Christian Principles. Do you understand what I mean??...My body is only for me. Yes!! I may share my poems and stories with you. That is all I can share...My hubby is so jealous and possessive. You had better believe it, dear!!...Sweet Tree: Please, read a personal message I have just sent to you. God Bless You!!Hugs. Sincerely, Stardust.:tybow: :thanx:


    Posted By stardust | Dec 8, 2006
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    yes Harry, I am listening and learning everyday:give_heart2:


    thanks again, Alan:huggles:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 8, 2006
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    I thought I would re-introduce myself......then Introduce Zaac

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    zaac's acrostic

    Delivered into life by the hand that holds the quill
    Ascended above life's quiver of arrows through love and iron will
    Very closely, watch his eyes, past the furrowed brow watch them gleam
    In tapestries of smiles and tears lie stories no one can see
    Deeper still to the heart of things, tho' faith is hard, he knows
    God has always watched him close, and never let him go
    Reaching out through indigo skies caressing heaven's door
    Above all things he's seen and done
    Forget everything, but love

    zaac


    Posted By zaac | Dec 9, 2006
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    Oh Zaac...that is a beautiful acrostic...........

    Painted ;)

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    Both of you are AMAZING, PD & zaac!!!!!!

    PD - thought the double "a" and the "z" might give you a hard time, but you handled them beautifully! (I think I would have gone with ZANY for the "z" though)! LOL!

    zaac - really like how you wrote this in the 3rd person. It sounds like you put a lot of thought and effort into this. It also sounds like you know yourself very well. Not many are that introspective. Glad you made mention of those gorgeous eyes!


    Posted By Altree94 | Dec 10, 2006
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    HI dear Tree!! Thank you for having started this awesome thread!! I am able to read AWESOME ACROSTICS and POEMS, as well. You are all indeed, very TALENTED POETS. Well, I wrote a little Acrostic. It is not that good, but still, I always try to learn a little more each day. I call it: "Good or Bad."

    Godfather. He was once married to a mean, rich godmother, dressed in 18 K. gold.
    Omnipotent!!...
    Only an old,
    Distinguished godfather,
    Or involved in a
    Rainbow of weird situations...
    Blame him for all the loss!! No fake imitations...
    Abnormal, twisted, or just plain evil, or a mean
    Distinguished godfather with a blue suit, but in SIN.

    Well, you see, I do not like some kind of people. So, I do not praise them. Hugs and Love to you. Sincerely, Stardust.:girlkiss: :bravo:


    Posted By stardust | Dec 10, 2006
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    Hi Tree!!! LOO!! I did have "Zany" at first, then changed it, so I changed it back, yes, it is more fitting of him! LOL!!!!!!!!!

    PD

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    tree,

    i just wrote my acrostic off the top of my head. truth comes easy.

    zaac


    Posted By zaac | Dec 10, 2006

    Altree94 VIP Member

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    PD - LOOOO! I am sure that he has been called worse!!!

    zaac - You could do one of these for Hannah and post it with her pic!

    TY!


    Posted By Altree94 | Dec 10, 2006
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    HI DEAR SWEET TREE!! You know that, you are writing beautiful Poetry, dear. I have just stopped to one of yours, and wrote my reply to you. It is Glamorously well written, the one in Spiritual Poetry. Please, take a look what I wrote for you, honey!!...This Thread is also so intesting. You have started it. I like writing ACROSTICS. You have just showed me the way to do it...Congratulations, dear Tree!! You are doing GREAT!! As soon as I have one, I shall Post it in here. Hugs and Love Always, from Stardust.:rightthere:


    Posted By stardust | Dec 11, 2006
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    ZAAC...awesome acrostic! It flows beautifully from beginning to end.
    Nomad
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    HI DEAR TREE!! I wrote an ACROSTIC with the Name of the Last Chapter of My Novel: "Living with the Enemy." It was written in South America, where the events had occurred. I called it: "GOALS."

    Godmother, rich, mean, evil murderess of
    Others and killer of herself: R.I.P.
    Ambitious, wicked godmother with 18 K. gold,
    Lost her soul in the silence of the depth.
    Sinful, bribed witch dived into her last breath.

    I may recall now, just a few words from that Chapter...
    Godmother once said: "When godfather goes out to pay a visit to you, you´ll begin to dance a solo music to nothing."
    So, she replied (to her) with her willpower like a whirlwind: "Well, let´s see if I may come back well, out of that visit!!...Then, I´ll be looking for you with the keen scent of a hound!!...So, you´ll begin to dance then, on a string of harps. I´ll begin to play my own Opera Music, and you´ll dance my way."
    That kind of Conversation (woman to woman) was only over the Phone...
    Bye for now, dear Tree. Hugs. Sincerely, Stardust.:girlkiss: :secret:


    Posted By stardust | Dec 11, 2006

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