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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    I asked Zaac to write an acrostic for me (Painted Diary), and here it is...simply beautiful, so I thought I would share. Thank you so much Zaac.:whistle3:

    Petals glistening, drinking deep the morning dew
    Azure skies reach out for God
    Indigo now forgotten, concedes in dark defeat
    Nowhere will you see the faith of dawn's persistence
    Tarry tho' it may til night has had its fill
    Enthralled by the very image of the life it breathes
    Delivering warmth and light to the object of it purpose

    Dare to wish upon the scent of newfound blooms
    In the rapture of the calm upon the waters cool
    A gentle call rises from within the soul of silence
    Releasing echoes of creation's heart to beat again
    You must know you will feel these things when first I touch you

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    Enter the dragon of sorts
    Really careless as to what his poetry means
    Intuitive in a way that brings out the best of me,
    Kind to anyone whose kind to him

    Eerily similar to a travesty
    Stark naked in all of my fatness when I write my poetry soemtimes
    Taking life not to seriously
    Abort this acrostic I should since its not my best
    Bringing soemthing different almost everytime I write
    Really loves poetry
    Occasionally tries to make his poem a rap
    Oafish to more refined gentlemen
    Kindling is what this poem would be used for if it wasn't on my pc.
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    HI DEAR ERIK!! I love your Acrostic. It sounds fantastic, the way you describe things. I´ll be kind to you, so I hope, you may be kind to me. Your style really impress me. You have done a good job!! Love it!! Hugs. Stardust.:sax: :thanx2:


    Posted By stardust | Dec 14, 2006
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    Hello Zaac: WOW!! You are indeed, a Talented Poet. I wish, I could write a Poem like that one. You are an Awesome Poet, Zaac!! The Acrostic written by you to Painted Diary, is just GREAT!! Thank you for sharing it!! I am sure, you have so much Inspirations in your heart of a Poet. Good for you!! I love your work, Zaac. Hugs. Stardust.:thanx2:


    Posted By stardust | Dec 14, 2006

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    ERIK! - I love this! Definitely NOT kindling material!

    Zaac: Nice one! Love that last line! TY PD for posting this!


    Posted By Altree94 | Dec 14, 2006

    Altree94 VIP Member

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    Since I wrote about my hubby in the RANT room (poem called I Married an Idiot) I've been feeling bad about that so I thought I would introduce y'all to the other side of this guy that I've been married to for the past 14 years.

    Blushes very easily
    Impressive physique
    Generous to a fault

    Atrocious sense of humor
    Laughter and love surrounds us.


    That's my Big Al, and I just gotta add that he has impeccable taste in women! LOL!


    So if you have a special someone in your life - introduce them to us here!


    Posted By Altree94 | Jan 1, 2007
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    Awwwww...beautiful Intro Ms Tree of your Hubby.......

    PD :bravo:

    Erik......nice one! Very descriptive!!!!!!
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    Well, here goes. I'm glad I don't have a long name.......


    Listen to the hounds bay on the moor,
    At nightfall they hunt the unsuspecting.
    Stick to the roads – follow no detour,
    Hurry on through, evade their detecting.
    Evening mists and shadows obscure
    Respired breaths and eyes reflecting.


    Posted By lasher | Jan 1, 2007

    Altree94 VIP Member

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    An excellent acrostic from an obvious Anne Rice fan!
    I loved her earlier novels but I find her later ones getting more and more long-winded. Have not read one lately- any reccomendations?
    TY for playing, Tom!
    :goodpost:


    Posted By Altree94 | Jan 1, 2007
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    ty Tree. I do luv Rice and yes, she can get a little loooong winded. Try Memnoch the Devil or The Tale of the Body Snatchers. Her Witching Hour trilogy (The Witching Hour, Lasher and Taltos) was excellent, but 1000+ pages on The Witching Hour did make that one a little long in some places - but well worth the read. Thanx again Tree


    Posted By lasher | Jan 2, 2007

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    Just very
    Emotional and
    Easyly drawn into the
    Zonary of nature.


    Posted By Jeez | Jan 2, 2007

    Altree94 VIP Member

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    Jeepers, Jeez!
    Exceptionally brilliant and
    Excellent use of the letter
    ZED!

    TY for posting!

    TY also to LASHER for the recommendations!


    Posted By Altree94 | Jan 3, 2007

    Jeez Banned

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    Thanks Tree..

    For the nice compliment.


    Posted By Jeez | Jan 3, 2007

    Altree94 VIP Member

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    You are most welcome, my friend!
    Really, I was just stating a fact. You ARE a truly gifted, exceptional and brilliant writer. I love your poetry and your talent has greatly enhanced this forum as has the works of the many others who have joined us here. As long as you are posting, Jen, I shall be reading!


    Posted By Altree94 | Jan 7, 2007

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    Chris Lawson

    Caring
    Humorous
    Relaxed
    Imaginative
    Smart

    Loveable
    Available
    Writer
    Sweet
    Open
    Nice

    (hey Tree, I made it! :D)

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    [IMG]
    Vibrant Colors are My thing
    Intellegance comes naturally to me
    Kittys own the face of the earth
    I am weird.

    Love Sucks.

    Happiness is relative
    Art comes naturally as well
    Rawrrr is fun to say out loud or yell at people
    Sometimes I lie
    Crap. I lied again.
    Have fun or else I'll beat chu up.
    [IMG]


    Posted By Aste | Jul 13, 2007

    Altree94 VIP Member

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    TY for playing my game Chris and Aste!

    LOVE it Chris - and I agree with every word!

    LOL @ Aste! - Great post! I love works that make me laugh! (nice bunny, too!)

    :jpicrocks:


    Posted By Altree94 | Jul 13, 2007

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    Thank you Tree! Love ya! :D
    ;)

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