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    As I look over the deep, cold, calm sea
    My surroundings do not look familiar
    I am on a ship as big as could be
    How did I get here? I scratch my head and go for the nearest bar.

    The intensity I feel and wonder why
    As if something happened here, I let out a big sigh
    I see people on the deck but through them I can see
    Am I dreaming? Is this a lie?

    I walk into a room, the band playing "Nearer My God To Thee"
    The ship feels solis but all the people transparent
    Of this deadly place I want to be free
    I smell death what an awful scent.

    I walk in the deck and see the name
    S.S. Titanic why am I here a dream?
    I was always intrigued by this ship's fame
    But so real this seems.

    I try to wake up, I let out a sigh
    I try to wipe my eyes to see that I am all right
    Glad I was just living a lie
    I take a step on the deck of what was supposed to be a lie.


    Posted By lanaia74 | Dec 6, 2006
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    Wow! To awaken from a nightmare to only realize you are living that nightmare is wild and frightening! Great work on this poem!


    Posted By Benny | Dec 6, 2006
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