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    Wind WindXSaul

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    I never knew if you ever thought of me
    So I kept my feeling to myself so for my own selfish
    Reason I could keep you closer toward me.
    But without warning you fell for another and easily
    My heart was broken,yet and still I carried on with that
    Fake smile.Never saying I love you,never telling you my
    Growing feeling,before I knew it you left me alone in this
    World,yes in this world which was so cold and heartless.
    My skin grew cold when I never got to say what was always
    On my twisting mind. When I smile I really cried,When I laughed
    I really was frowning,When I would look at you looking in you eyes
    And knew this was a feeling of disappointment since it been one-sided
    Since the first time we meet but now you've gone and left me in a world
    Which is so cold only you made it warm enough to go on.
    If I only could have told you the truth would you had not been running away?
    My heart aches my bones break my head numb,to think I feel in love
    with a guy who knew only how to make me cry.Just exactly what I am I?
    This was our farewell even if it was all one-sided just telling you now

    I honestly always will love you


    This is for the man I loved who feel's for another....and he passed away 09/29/12 saturday....May you rest in peace Saul and come back to me soon


    Posted By Wind | Oct 6, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    :cry:

    Painful read... But wow. I know sometimes we simply cannot control who and how we fall in love. But honestly girl... If this dude wasn't for you when he was alive....then you simply may want to let him go rest in piece. It's not an easy process - I know this through experience. I also know that there's plenty of fish out there in the sea and one or more of them may be for you.

    I think this writing poetry may be you letting Saul go rest in piece.

    J.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Oct 6, 2012
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    Wind WindXSaul

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    I will....i don't care to much for Saul anyways.It good he dead....yeah it great:firedevil:


    Posted By Wind | Oct 7, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Good he's dead? Hmmm - seems like you're moving on then, which for all intents and purposes seems like a good thing to me. Because your poetry and profile posts have just been filled with sadness. I, for one, wonder what other types of writes and witticisms you have to share with the community!

    J.

    btw - Nice to see your mood move from Suicidal to Heartbroken ==> One step at a time girl!


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Oct 7, 2012
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    Wind WindXSaul

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    thank you very much...but being heartbroken isn't about him it just is i like the picture ;) but yeah moving on and forgetting ...aways seem fun to do it that way.


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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Fun and therapeutic I'd say. And yeah - sometimes we have to dwell in our own heartbreak before we can truly live in a world that would see our heart forever broken and never mended. I think it's called survival of the fittest.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Oct 7, 2012
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    Wind WindXSaul

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    Very true to that
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