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    Posted By Jeez | Mar 1, 2007
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    Ummmm - A bit of a risque piece from you JEEZ - I like this one - though I will point out the misspelling of "insert" LOL ---- Anyway - seems you wanna take relationship to the next level with a lover your extremely fond of... Perhaps even a one-night stand or some such.

    But the underlying theme: It's Time - insinuates you've been waiting - So perhaps the 1st is more appropriate - from friend to lover...

    Anyway - I'd love to know.... What inspired you to right this one ;)

    Thanx for the share!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Mar 1, 2007
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    Posted By Jeez | Mar 1, 2007
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    I don't give a hoot what you meant....lol...I KNOW what I took from this one! WOW...how eroticially and sensually divine! Great soft whisper here...!


    Posted By Benny | Mar 4, 2007
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    I was actually being a bit nosey JEEZ - I want to know WHO inspired this write :p
    At anyrate - very lovely piece of writing!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Mar 4, 2007
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    Posted By Jeez | Mar 6, 2007
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    Posted By Jeez | Mar 6, 2007
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    tehehhe --- I see still no answer :p LOL
    Allrighty then! One must indeed keep secrets at times.
    Enjoyable write none-the-less!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Mar 7, 2007
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    Posted By Jeez | Mar 8, 2007
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    LOL


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    My Dearest Jeez,

    Ahhhhh another beauty. Do not laugh, but when I first read this I thought of Rube Goldberg instantly. I thought a crazy invention that could turn on water with the turn of the key into the clock. I also thought of a unison, because it says....you make me want to insert my key...You know I love this style of writing that we share, for short, sweet, risque (as Ms Jacquii says, lol), pieces, that let's the mind go wherever it wants.....like BENNY!!!! LOLOL!!!!

    Beautiful daydreamy (lol) piece nevertheless Ms Jeez......I wonder whose hands inserted the key...hmmm...;)2...Love Ya'!!

    Dr. Rob
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    Is that DR. ROB making fun of my "risque" :( ====> LOL

    JAcquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Mar 8, 2007
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    LOLOL @ Ms Jaquii, I love the word risque! LOLOL...like my new signature?:bigboss: :coolgum:

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    Posted By Jeez | Mar 10, 2007
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    OMG - OK LOL

    Jacquii.

    ps - anyway to get a penetrating answer :p

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    Posted By Jeez | Mar 12, 2007
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    LOL Jeez....yes and we are STILL awaiting the penetrating answers, ahemmmmm.LOLOL

    My PhD is in Educational Psychology.......and it did not prepare me for writes like yours!!!! LOLOL

    BTW---->I have a secret :secret:, lol.......I love playing doctor to!!!:reefer: :D
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    Jeez, this simplistic piece is certainly open to interpretation! Beauty in it's essence!

    :dance2:

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    Posted By Jeez | Mar 14, 2007
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