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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    ~JE NE SAIS QUOIS~

    There was a certain
    je ne sais quois about
    you that circled your
    aura like the moon
    revolves around the earth.

    An air of charm swept me
    beyond the stars to a place
    I dreamed of as a little girl
    whenever you breezed past me.

    The Xanadu in your eyes
    hypnotized me until all I could
    see was the Venus of your face
    as the center of my universe.

    Your suave walk and fast lane
    talk whet the woman in me as
    we undressed each other with
    our eyes and made mental love
    as the moon watched and
    told our secret to the stars.

    Paradise found us and no
    earthly bounds could keep me
    from the sans souci of your
    touch which gave chills to
    the butterflies in my belly.

    You were my god of taboo
    and I was your goddess of
    pleasure and together we
    defied the laws of energy.

    © Karen Davies


    Posted By Moonchild | Apr 5, 2008
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    Terence Member

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    Sounds like you defied more than the laws of energy, Karen, 'god of taboo' and 'goddess of pleasure' make for a very exciting, and dangerous, combination.
    Enjoyed the journey through the heavens.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Apr 8, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thank you Terence.
    lol...this is a made up poem and it was fun!


    Posted By Moonchild | Apr 8, 2008
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