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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Junipers hold their,
    jewels, their essence disappears,
    when held in my hand.

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    Erik, this was a lovely ku, that left such an aesthetic visual for me. Thank you for sharing this with us. Is this your first ku, you have posted? If so, I would love to see more!!!

    ~*Painted*~ ;)

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    I think its my second one thing I've learned you can rearrange but you can't force a ku
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    always enjoyed the far east genres... i enjoyed this bite- sized canvas.

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    i appreciate your viewpoint so much ariono since this is the first time you've commented on my work

    Benny New Member

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    Great visual, Erik! I cannot write Haiku...but, you seem pretty good at it. I enjoyed this one...very much, friend.


    Posted By Benny | Dec 23, 2006
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    thanks Benny, yeah i do haiku every now and then

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    Wow! Erik:

    How easy it looks to write a Haiku.
    I've only writen four Haiku, and find them very challenging. My compliments to you on a great write! good job!


    Blessings
    Sally

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    thanks Sally its best when you let haikus just come to you,
    I used to find them challenging, sinceyou don't usually get to elaborate your opinions on them but with a grain of salt zen-like approach haikus can be rather simple thanks allot sally and nice to hear from you

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