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Discussion in 'Miscellaneous' started by Juzjon, Jun 4, 2007.



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    I had a friend named Ketel One
    we spoke most every night
    he always had been good to me
    kept conversation light

    But now he's Ketel Two you see
    this friend makes me feel good
    I really really like him
    I really knew I could

    Ketel Two was perfect
    straight up or on the rocks
    a fuzzy buzzy feeling
    slight slurring in our talks

    When he turned to Ketel Three
    an every evening chap
    it got to where I'd talk to me
    as he sat on my lap

    Ketel Three could some times cause
    a trip, or spill or mess
    but Ketel Three was my true friend
    to that I will confess

    But then came Mr Ketel Four
    his friendship was my foe
    see Ketel Four meant forgetfulness
    forgot things I should know

    He hung around way too much
    other friendships had turned sore
    though I did like Ketel One
    he's not my friend no more

    Not Ketel nor his buddy,
    who think their oh so cute,
    I chased them all away for good,
    and that's an Absolut !!!!


    Posted By Juzjon | Jun 4, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    How unique.

    The meter and rhyme was right on.
    You structure was exstreemly well done, and the message was very informative.

    Thank You for a great read.

    Blessings

    Juzjon New Member

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    (hicup) thanks,

    lol,

    Juz


    Posted By Juzjon | Jun 4, 2007
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