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    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    If it is your plan to get very far

    Traveling the road of life’s hopes and dreams

    You have to forever know who you are

    And do not forget to be who you seem

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    Traveling the road of life’s hopes and dreams

    Lies an answer ~ seek not what can’t be found

    And do not forget to be who you seem

    Fame and fortune is way too far renown

    ~

    Lies an answer ~ seek not what can’t be found

    The treasure is buried within your soul

    Fame and fortune is way too far renown

    To be true to oneself must be the goal

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    The treasure is buried within your soul

    You have to forever know who you are

    To be true to oneself must be the goal

    If it is your plan to get very far

    ~

    Mjcarson

    9-18-2007


    Posted By Kit Carson | Sep 18, 2007
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Such true words of wisdom Kit.
    Well said and formed.
    A wonderful Pantoum!
    And it was needed cause sometimes we forget
    who we are. Thanks for the reminder!


    Posted By Moonchild | Sep 19, 2007
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    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you Moonchild, I'm catching a lot of heat for dating it a month in advance. Some people...lol.


    Posted By Kit Carson | Sep 19, 2007
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    This poem has a powerful message. It got me thinking. My future is so undetermined at the moment, it's hard to hold to some of those values. I'll try to keep them in mind.

    Thanks for sharing Kit.


    Posted By JolieH | Sep 19, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Ya! Who we are and who we seem, and who we think that we are...sometimes gets pretty cloudy...and we can't figure out which one is the real deal, let alone other people...

    Very nice pantoum...I am a fan of the repetition!

    Nomad

    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    Thanks Jolie and Therese. I also love this form, you simply can't write nonchanlantly in this form.


    Posted By Kit Carson | Sep 25, 2007
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