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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Life needs
    no
    explanation
    no
    gyrating motions
    to
    express beauty
    to
    feel freely
    to
    wistfully wish
    upon
    the
    North Star
    no
    translation
    no
    further education
    to
    appreciate
    our
    existence.

    Is
    just is!
    He created
    vibrated
    through
    heavens
    ran a
    thin blue
    line
    tensile
    strength
    reaching
    earth
    welcomed
    accepted
    not
    always
    but
    still
    life
    is.

    © nomadic rhymer

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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Therese,

    I love this and I love the concept and everything this poem represents and depicts. Life, and no need to analyze, it is beautiful, and a blessing, as it was created. It just is...life! :bravo: Life does have the dark side, tests and tribulations. Often times without those things one cannot appreciate or know how to best deal with the light. i also the the words tensile strength and was a great visual. Flowing freely down the page and loving every word, in that unique style. Thank you Ms Nomad for sharing. Loved it!

    Kim :)

    p.s. Welcome Back from Vacation, Hope You Enjoyed!

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Therese,

    These kind of free style poems can really help the reader feel the impact of each word. It is almost as if the poems layout represents that "tensile strength" in its line down the page. My fav:
    Glad you are back!

    Jerry
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    Nomad,

    A great write... How true it is - this is a beautiful existence, it doesn't need explanations, but one should pay attention. I luv your form, the line breaks are perfect for this poem. Thanx for sharin'.... Hey Nomad, where does someone from sunny California go on vacation??


    Posted By lasher | Jul 26, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thanks so much, Kim, Jer and Lasher, for your wonderful comments!! Kim I had a wonderful time.....Lasher, one goes home to Belize (even sunnier!) :grandpiano:

    Nomad

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