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    Lakes like chips of ice scattered across the face of the city.

    Each a shattered mirror piece of an open sky.


    Kayakers slipping past the shore into the morning calm.


    As the sun struggles to rise the peace is broken

    the wind rises and the water's calm belongs to past.

    A thousand wavelets break the mirror into ever tinier pieces

    until at last there is no more reflection.

    But the morning breeze brings cool relief after the

    sticky heat of a tropical summer.


    Posted By Poetry | Jul 20, 2007
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    I love this Bravo! Sort of like my rhyme style. Unique and captivating.

    Tamare

    KayaOtah happy as ever

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    Love all the lines, they're so wonderful and the poem is so vivid.
    It's easy to read and attractive...
    *smiles*


    Posted By KayaOtah | Jul 27, 2007
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