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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    L ayer by layer of beautified art,
    A bstact illusions will gladly impart.
    M emerable moments adheres to the mind,
    E ach digital pattern's uniquely designed.
    N estled within like the art of mosaic,
    T ickles the senses and makes the heart quake,
    S plendid arrays are worth more than one take.

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    this is lovely Sally,
    the perfect example of an acrostic,
    refreshing yet still describing the title

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    Sally

    very very nice write, there's beauty in each line.
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Mar 18, 2007
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    Dear Sally,

    :wow: This is so beautiful! Got more exquisite with each line, describing Laments to the fullest. Made me smile and feel very warm after reading. Thank you for sharing!!!


    {{{~~**KIM**~~}}};)
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    Sealiah Poetic Dancer

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    It made me think of regret, and yet... the happy feeling that looking back on memories can give you. As if thinking of a loved one that has passed, and while you're sad... you remember the good times, and you start to feel better, though it's a bittersweet feeling.


    Posted By Sealiah | Mar 19, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Beautiful, Sally, and a little sad...lovely work!!

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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    I agree with TOM = there's beauty in each line - which is quite difficult to accomplish --- actually --- with the acrostic form - but I think you know what you're doing with this piece SALLY :p

    The last line tells it all LOL - I did have to read a couple of times... Splendid poem!
    Thanx for sharing.

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Mar 20, 2007
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