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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Leaving home
    takes
    the breath
    away
    suffering
    spirits.
    Southwind
    stirs
    arriving late
    carrying wishes
    downstream
    slippery
    imaginings
    solidify
    in sunlight
    breaking
    tradition
    finding their
    way home
    again.
    Hearts healed.

    © nomadicrhymer

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Not a doodle!!!!!!!!!!!

    Therese,

    :wow: you've placed each word with care and I love the ending. My fav:
    I'm coming back to this one!!!!


    Jerry
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thanks SO much Jerry...very humbling...I appreciate your taking the time to comment!! Awesome...

    Nomad
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    Dear Therese,

    A double :wow::wow: for this, and tis more than doodling! This was heartfelt and as Jerry said carefully painted. Within it's brevity is such strength, and strong images. I am placing in my favorites, and an excellent rating from me as well. I love your style, and is quite memorable. I could not pick a favorite line cuz I would have quoted the entire piece! There is calm in it as well, a soothing of the soul, a tranquility that I felt as well. Like you are speaking for so many. Awesome!

    Kimberly :)
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    PD :yay:

    YOU always bring out more and make it more spectacular even to the writer...that's what I so love about you...you are the Encourager personified...and have a gift from God...and you use it well....thanks bunches!!

    Nomad
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    Dear Therese,

    One fact I know is that you are a Spectacular writer (very unique), and I have the utmost respect for you and your writing. We are blessed to have you here at JPiC. I am in awe of your work, and you continue to raise the bar. No BSing, just facts.

    Kimberly :)

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    very eloquent, done with sophistication grace and most importantly style
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Hey Erik, thanks so much for reading and commenting...your commentary is very stylish too! lol!

    The jogging skeleton, Erik? U still jogging many miles?

    Thanks again,

    Nomad

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    Simply Beautiful, Crisp & Insightful...
    Love the way it's placed upon the page.
    Impressed,
    Peace@Love,
    PenDragon


    Posted By papasan22 | Jun 30, 2007
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    simply brilliant penning Nomad insightful honest written with a prefect touch of love
    you are a very gifted and talented writer
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Jun 30, 2007
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    How many times have I left home? I mean, not just my family, but even my core beliefs? Nicely written piece:)
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Hey Soul...thanks...as long as you make it back...no biggie, huh? Hopefully you learn new trails when you leave home and can backtrack to revive yourself before adventuring again...or is it losing your way again? :confused: :smooch:

    Nomad
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    Papasan and Bear...thank you both SO much for taking precious time to read and comment...wonderfully inspiring comments I must say...so encouraging...thanks much! :yay:

    Nomad :yes:

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    incredible!! brilliant diction. it really touched me because i'm about to be moving away from my family. this is so sweet.
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Hi louisianagal - I appreciate the comments...yes, I live away from home as well...and can only go for so long before returning for a visit...wonderful to have somewhere to go back to that touches your heart and renews your spirit.
    Happy Trails!
    Nomad:girlwacko:

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    A stream of conscious lists

    It is nice to see a kind of lyric awareness. A poetry of existence.


    Posted By Poetry | Jul 19, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Michael, hi! Thanks for reading this piece while I was on vacation...so happy that you thought there was something here worth commenting on. :yay:

    Nomad

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