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    Remove me from the lens of sin,
    that I might see thy grace within.

    Tear me from the view of two,
    that ALL may come to sup with you.

    Shred the painful lie of error
    as I find grace within the terror.

    Surrendered to the fact that ALL
    in truest form before the fall
    has led us to thy holy feast
    to dine within our Christed beast.

    I say to you in words of truth
    judge not the cloak or dragons tooth.

    For mysteries logic has no face
    whilst mind enslaves the human race
    To know, one has to truly taste.
    To see one has to Know no waste.

    My prayer then lord is thanks to Thee
    for ALL the things you bring to me.

    From double edged sword of my creation
    To quickened cells of pure elation.

    Remove me from the lens of sin
    so I might see the truth within.


    I Love Me Love You Love ALL…
    Mark


    Written by Mark Roske
    Copyright 2007


    Posted By papasan22 | Jun 22, 2007
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    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Mark,

    Ah! The lens of sin doth keep us all captured by is haze upon the truth. Thanks for sharing!

    My Fav:

    Jerry
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hey MARK and welcome to the JPiC Community!
    If you haven't done so thus far - feel free to introduce yourself via the Member Introductions section

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    Very nice poem - the rhythm is very nice - the meter of your poem is right on point - the unforced rhyme works rather well actually - The substance of your poem: AMAZING.

    Talk of spiritual faith:

    Interesting stanza - then talk of dragon's tooth... Nice effect - Has a mystical quality amid the spiritualesqu.

    A very nice 1st share - Thanx.

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jun 22, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Mark:
    Welcome to the forum!
    Lovely poem. Mythical creatures are always great to read about. Especially dragons! Mythology is one of my favorite things to read. Your poem is awesome. I really enjoyed it.
    btw. I absolutely love the pic of your beautiful breathtaking chakra colors.
    I look forward in reading more of your work.

    Blessings

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    TY

    Thank you all for your wonderful comments, I feel very welcome Here~!~~!~!
    Peace@Love,
    PenDragon


    Posted By papasan22 | Jun 23, 2007
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    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    Mark,
    Welcome to JCIP! That's a whale of a poem to start with! I look forward to seeing more and love Jimi. I find that so many people concentrate on his guitar and music and forget how mighty his voice and words were. Total package ripped from us too soon. I look forward to your words.
    Peace


    Posted By Kit Carson | Jun 23, 2007
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