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    Posted By Jeez | Nov 11, 2006
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    Well written about deep need...strong ties...sometimes they never go away. I really loved this work!


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    yea, it's some emotion in there and honestly, it seems as if there's a child split between her parents and the girl really rather be with the mother than the father....

    at the same time, i also see it as a role model not accepting responsibility...
    whatever it is or may be, i like the emotion and challenge of understanding this peace!


    Posted By yngst | Nov 21, 2006
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    Dear Jeez,

    You have a fascinating writing style that I love. Your work is not predictable, and depicts your amazing range in this craft and art form. I loved this piece, and I do believe, that the piece can be perceived to mean different emotions for different readers. Thank you for sharing this little piece of Paradise with us.

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