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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by santui, Oct 21, 2006.



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    I'm gonna close my eyes.

    tell myself to never cry again.
    after all it's only the end.

    Please heart, just let him go.

    I took all his lies
    and built a castle
    straight up to the sky.
    then one by one
    dreams began to die.

    Please heart, just let him go.

    if I stand out in the rain
    no one can see my tears
    maybe I'll walk away
    try to live again.
    i thought i had found
    what i was looking for.
    but he loved me less
    while i loved him more.

    Please heart, just let him go.


    Posted By santui | Oct 21, 2006
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    this work was wonderful as well, I like your material very much so far
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    Dear Santui,

    This is very poignant and quite lovely as far as your impeccable writing ability and style. I love your usage of the English language just so, that in a small canvas you paint imagery so real...beautiful. I love your works, and am smiling from ear to ear. So proud to be part of this Forum and being blessed to experience such paradise. Santui, thank you so much for sharing. Take Care.

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    santui New Member

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    aww shucks...you made me blush :yay2:


    Posted By santui | Oct 21, 2006
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