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    dolores1961 New Member

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    life in the forest

    in the forest deep
    the sounds of are songs
    of nature

    blending sounds
    of birds
    of the wind in the trees
    of the howls of creatures unseen
    of the birth of living beings growing

    deep within the earth
    symphonies of mystical tunes
    calling out
    beckoning us to
    join in

    within the forest's shadows
    there lies a heartbeat
    of life
    a stanza of the secret
    of life
    seduction of the unknown

    yet, there is no alienation
    only the pull to go further
    into the forest's roots
    to find the answer

    to its' compelling song
    of birth
    of growth
    of death
    of resurrection.

    by dolores
    written july 24, 2001


    Posted By dolores1961 | Dec 8, 2006
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    lovely poem delores nature is so exciting and grand,
    really i felt just a tease of the words you controlled the wording very carefully,
    I felt I was going to be wowed but instaed it very serene and very good

    dolores1961 New Member

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    :wineglass: thanks so very much for reading my poetry! your feedback is so encouraging!!! happy holidays!

    love ...
    dolores...a friend


    Posted By dolores1961 | Dec 9, 2006
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    :birthday1: :mail: :bigboss: Brilliant! Superb! Applauds!


    Posted By lanaia74 | Dec 9, 2006
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    dolores1961 New Member

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    thanks!

    thanks for your positive, encouraging feeback!!!!:friends:

    love...
    dolores:wineglass:


    Posted By dolores1961 | Dec 9, 2006
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