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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by Aste, Sep 25, 2007.



    Aste Intellectual Teen

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    Life is a game
    In which all that we do
    Is go from problem to problem
    From pursue to review

    We conquer each challenged
    Presented with more
    We fight through the obstacles
    We Battle the war

    Yet presented with love
    We follow it blind
    Knowing it fruitless
    Our mind re-aligned

    Though the concept not foreign
    To thoughts of remorse
    It fetches no more victory
    Then that of brute force

    For this game that we’re playing
    We can’t ever win
    We can only find solace
    In our thoughts forged within


    Inspired by the book 1984, Because I'm reading it. I love it. It is amazing. o.o


    Posted By Aste | Sep 25, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Very well written and there is very good follow through on the concept...good work!! :yay:

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    Victoria,
    In a way, the message in this is like I've often said to you, life is the most challenging video game you will ever play. If you spent as much time with your schoolwork as with some of the video games, you'd be a big winner in your future life. I've seen how determind you kids can be to conquer a game. I hope you find as much determination for you future career. You have the mind and talent already.

    Geate work, and I plan to read that book too.


    Posted By JolieH | Sep 26, 2007
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