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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Tender is a woman's breast
    as her babe feeds while she rests.
    Gentle are the trees that sway
    underneath a sky of gray.

    Morning glories, beauty rare,
    breathe the fresh and mountain air.
    Life is gladness, life is sorrow,
    life is planning for tomorrow.

    Quiet is the moonlit night
    as heaven's stars twinkle bright.
    Softness is the wind that blows
    through the grains of wild meadows.

    Streams flow onward searching for
    other distant land or shore.
    Life is watching children play,
    growing up from day to day.

    Freshness is the smell of rain
    landing lightly on the plain.
    Beauty is a rainbow high
    stretching over our endless sky.

    Life is laughter, life is tears,
    life is thoughts of yesteryears.
    Life is living, life is dreams,
    life is what the future brings.

    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    well expressed piece, nice imagery used...I pleasure to read you:goodpost:


    Posted By Echoes | Jun 25, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Thank You Lisa:

    I am glad you enjoyed this poem. When one thinks about lifeIt can bring on a world of imagination and truths. I think I covered quite a bit with this one.

    Thanks again. Your comment was greatly appreciated. :)

    Blessings

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    awesoem poem Sally life is allot of thing but being makes life important
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    Dear Sally,

    :wow::wow: Ya know I for one cannot pen a poem about life and I find it so amazing that you did this effortlessly. Sally, you should consider submitting this to greeting card companies. It read like a wonderful anthem about "Life", the truth of life, what is should be. Phenomenal in execution and rhyme as well. Loved it! Excellent rating.

    Kim :)

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    You are so welcome Erik:
    Your comments always make me feel so :smooch: Thank you,

    Kim: What an idea. I never thought about greeting card companies. maybe I should try some of them. Thanks for your sweet comment you too deserve a :smooch: so here ya are.

    I glad I could put a smile on your faces.

    Blessings

    KayaOtah happy as ever

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    this stanza reminds me of the song 'it's a small wolrd'

    It's a world of laughter
    And a world of tears
    It's a world of hope
    And a world of fears...

    Maybe it could be made into a song... *smiles* hahaz


    Posted By KayaOtah | Jun 29, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Thanks Kayanta:

    Yes, This poem is somewhat like Walt Disney's song "It's a small world" I never thought about that before. neat.
    I'm glad you like this one. Thanks for your most welcomed comment :)

    Blessings

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    brilliant penning Sally and that is life beautifully worded as each stanza is written with a loving hand filled with life
    hugs kisses
    bear
    I love this poem


    Posted By Bear | Jun 30, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Thanks Dear Honey Bear:

    Your words are always comforting and most welcomed. I am happy you enjoyed this one. It's writer's like you who are so well talented that always keeps me inspired.

    Thanks again
    Blessings

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