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    "Life Without Friends." (Friendship Poem). Author: Stardust. (5-11-2007).

    Life without friends
    Is like open fields without the rain.
    No one to share a word with in a day,
    No one to wipe your tears away.

    Life without friends
    Is like no water in an empty road.
    No one to give you a hand nor a hug,
    No shoulders to lean on.

    I am running dry, my friend!!
    My tears soak the road you walk.
    Give me a chance, let´s talk!!...
    Why don´t you give me a hand??
    You melt and bury my tears in the sand.

    Life without true friends
    Is a lonely life to lead.
    Let me plant the love seeds
    In your heart to the end!!
    Would you be my true friend??...

    Author: Stardust. (5-11-2007).:sign_happybday::peace::peace:
    No one has said Happy Birthday to me...It was my birthday last Sunday. Thank you anyway!! Hugs.
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    Posted By stardust | Sep 28, 2007
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    :omg: awwww I am sorry Stardust ... :chococake::birthday::birthday1: Forgive me .... I never knew..

    And please count me as a friend? I love your poem.... I have felt like that in the past. You describe it so well. Excellent write hon.

    :hug:

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Sep 29, 2007
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    Hey now Stardust,

    Happy birthday to you...I hope you had a great day... Sorry, I had no clue....
    Nice penning, and it's so true, "life without true friends is a lonely life to lead"..
    Everybody needs a friend.....


    Posted By lasher | Sep 29, 2007
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Hello Dear Mysty: Thank you for reviewing my little friendship poem!! Your wise appraisal makes me soooo very happy. YES!! I count you as my friend. It´s OK. about my birthday. Nobody really knew. I just don´t like to tell my age. I lost count, after all. I should have to begin all over again. I do believe in true friendship. It feels a lonely World without good friends. God bless you, sweet Mysty, in all you do!! Heartfelt thoughts, Starry.:heart::heart::tybow:
    Hello Lasher: Wooowww!! It is so good to see you reading my poem and offering your gentle comments. Thank you for sharing your point of views!! Yes!! It is indeed, so important to have good friends in our World. I believe in real friendship. I guess, I just can´t live without good friends. I am a loving woman. I hope to see you more often.
    Cheers, Starry.:tybow::heart::heart:


    Posted By stardust | Sep 29, 2007
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    Starry! So sorry! Of course you have many, many friends here on JPiC, as I'm sure you know. I am glad that your poem was written way back in May, and hopefully doesn't reflect how you feel at the moment. My daughter's birthday was on Saturday the 29th, so you are close in dates.

    :birthday: :birthday3: HAPPY BIRTHDAY :TUBA: :girllove: :monkeydance: :jump: :chococake:

    I hope that you had a really wonderful and memorable day for your birthday.

    Nomad
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Hi beautiful lady, sweet dear friend Nomad!! Thank you for reading my friendship poem and offering your gentle comments!! YES!! I feel that I have made a World of Friends by now. I am so happy about it. I earned the affection of my good friends, I guess. About my birthday, it was OK., nothing too special... Well, your dear daughter must be a Libra like me, if she was born at the end of September. Libra is the Zodiac Sign of Equilibrium and Good Balance in Life. Oriental Philosophers talk about the Ging and Geng. I haven´t written any new poems lately. But, if I don´t post, I shall definetely read the work of other poets, as soon as I find a quiet moment. My life has not been a bed of roses, nor a bowl of cherries lately. It is always great to see you around, my friend Nomad. God bless you in all you do!! God bless all your loved ones too!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOUR DEAR SWEET DAUGHTER, FROM STARRY!! Cheers, Starry.:welcome3::welcome3:


    Posted By stardust | Oct 2, 2007
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    I know this post is VERY old but i just thought you'd like to know that after 5+ years your beautiful and incredibly true poem is still shared by MANY and ranking along with a beautiful picture as a HOT topic on google+. This is how i feel today and i thank you for your poem from the bottom of my heart. I hope your life is filled with more true friends than you can keep within view in that open field. I hope mine is one day as well.

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    JONATHAN living not existing.

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    Happy Birthday starry starry lady .. sorry Im late but we did not have a clue and its time I think that we revive the birthday thread which I will bring to Ms Jacquii's attention soon.. This poem here is filled with simple explicit honesty, it was a pleasure to read and may the Good lord bless you dear simple heart .. much love much love :giftrose:
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    Posted By JONATHAN | Mar 20, 2013
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    Wow! Amazing poem and sorry to hear about your situation but you have a friend in me.. :)
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Hi Razor Blade, I am so pleased to meet you.
    Thank you for caring to visit me and post your most amazing comments!
    I highly appreciate friendship and loving ways.
    Starry.:friends:


    Posted By stardust | Oct 28, 2013
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Well - you guys know I'm always late - it's a trait built into my DNA I suppose :LOL:
    Here's wishing you much love though Ms Starry. Whether its your birthday or any other day - you're loved and appreciated here!

    J.
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    I hope you are doing great Starry! And I hope that things are going a little better for you as well.

    God Bless!
    Nomad :cool:
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you Ms. Jacquii, Nomad, and all friends who care to visit my pages
    and express lovely thoughts about my artwork!
    I am truly flattered...
    Happy Holidays Season, my dear friends!
    Warm Hugs & Much Love Always,
    Starry.


    Posted By stardust | Nov 26, 2013
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you Ms. Jacquii, Nomad, and all friends who care to visit my pages
    and express lovely thoughts about my artwork!
    I am truly flattered...
    Happy Holidays Season, my dear friends!
    Warm Hugs & Much Love Always,
    Starry.


    Posted By stardust | Nov 26, 2013
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