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    latishaslove New Member

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    Like a Ghost

    I am walking like some kinda ghost
    Walking into oblivion
    And I am lost
    Lost in space on earth
    Does that make any sense?
    Anyway, forget it

    I am walking like some kinda ghost
    Walking into oblivion
    And I am lost
    Lost here
    Here, where?
    Here
    If I knew where
    Then I wouldn’t be lost would I?

    I am walking like some kinda ghost
    Transparent but a mystery
    Clueless yet full of knowledge
    Do you understand what I am saying?
    Never mind, don’t think about it

    I am walking like some kinda ghost
    And I am worthless
    Yet valued more than gold
    I am walking like some kinda ghost
    To meet my inevitable doom
    But I stand my ground

    I am walking like some kinda ghost
    And I am dizzy
    I am spinning in circles but I am not moving
    I am walking like some kinda ghost

    And I’m scared
    But of what I fear
    I do not know
    I am walking like some
    Kinda ghost
    Walking through my twenties

    Author Latisha J Greaves Barker

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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Well...haha! That reminded me of my twenties...though I think I was purposefully doing some serious baby-making and having fun, fun, fun! So I hope then that this was a temporary state and that you will definitely make the most of your twenties...:irateangel:

    I like the extremely free style with which this was written, as if you were writing down each thought as it popped into your head...no apologies...my favorite style of writing.

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    I like the repetition you have going on here :}
    But the"kinda" makes me squint >:blank:
    lol. oh well, nice job!

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    Yup, you're right I was writing it as it was coming to me, just let it flowed and that's what it turned out to be. Didn't even know what I was talking about till the last line, when I said "walking through my twenties."

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