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    I long for the gift of line
    and symmetry

    To draw the beauty of a
    rosebud as it opens,
    to understand
    a miracle unfolding
    through my hand

    To portray subtle changes in
    clouds carried by wind,
    feel movement
    through my pen

    To express the eternity of waves
    continually renewing
    the shore,
    to sense the promise of the tides
    through my lines

    To create an image of you
    for others to know you
    through my heart

    I long for the gift, rare and wonderful, of line
    and symmetry


    Posted By mslit | May 19, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Very beautifully said Mslit.
    I can relate and feel the same way.
    Very creative and a fresh way to view things.
    This is really good...love it!


    Posted By Moonchild | May 20, 2008
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    i love this, it captures exactly why true authors write. it expresses that deep creative need only a few of us share to not just let our emotions go or write a great piece but to create life, read in between the lines of the simplist things in life, and see beauty in all that is alive. i am so proud to have read this. you represent true writers everywhere.

    mslit New Member

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    very much appreciate your kind words


    Posted By mslit | May 26, 2008
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    wonderfully penned Mslit I could feel that wind flowing through your fingers I could see the clouds slowly drifting away. excellent poem
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | May 26, 2008
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