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Discussion in 'Spoken Word & Freestyle' started by Jeez, Oct 2, 2006.



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    Posted By Jeez | Oct 2, 2006
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    How beautiful JEEZ - I am loving the immediacy and the intimacy and the spontaneity of this poem - Seems you're reminiscing about something very very sweet.

    Though it is a bit difficult for me imagining lips having infrastructure LOL - you language throughout this poem is very good.

    Nicely written - Great sharing!
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    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Oct 2, 2006
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    Dear Jeez,

    This was a sweet tribute to such an intimately beautiful experience. I agree with Ms Jacquii, reads as if reminiscing of such a sweet duet. This was well written, and quite lovely. Thank you for sharing. I may not look at lips the same! LOL!! Beautiful. Much Luv...

    Kimberly aka Painted Diary

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    Posted By Jeez | Oct 3, 2006
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    Posted By Jeez | Oct 3, 2006
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    Well!!! that certainly got my attention lol, was nice to read something this moist without bringing a cheap crudeness to it, good post... Sax.


    Posted By saxonshadow | Oct 3, 2006
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    Whoa! Really Sensual! I think I need a cold shower!

    Seriously - I have to agree with Saxonshadow - it is great to be able to read a work that is sensual without being crude. This poem brings sweet memories of a first real kiss. Good job - keep posting!


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    Posted By Jeez | Oct 5, 2006
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