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    sagesweetwater Lesbian Novelist

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    Music---Sage Sweetwater creates in multimedia
    http://www.authorsden.com/adstorage/29292/sptiso.mid

    Inception depicts
    reality,

    frivolity depicts
    reality a myth?
    Not!

    Altering, enhancing
    affects our mood,
    creates a high
    in digital whispers.

    When complex emotions
    are difficult to verbalize,
    the emotional counterpart
    moves us in liquid light.

    The Star Sapphire
    projects onto the
    astral dancefloor,
    merging aural and
    visual in multi-layered
    imagery in planetary
    affair.

    Pulsar on the
    mind, dancing
    Liquid Light: Star Sapphire.

    Digital whispers.


    Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hey SAGESWEETWATER - such a symphony of words... As a Virgo, sapphire is my birthstone and you have depicted somewhat of the very presense that sapphire is and what it represents: royal mystique...

    creates a high
    in digital whispers.


    When complex emotions
    are difficult to verbalize,
    the emotional counterpart
    moves us in liquid light.


    Interesting write, as I believe you may be talking of some kind of sacred union and the secrecy that is inherent in such a union... The way you've handled the topic is lightly touched with a bit of humor really, as if you were being toungue-in-cheek about the sacred secrecy...

    Anyway - that prolly makes no sense - But again, I would love to know your inspiration for this piece. Seems like you had a lot of fun scribing this poem = so share the fun girlfriend :p

    Jacquii.


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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    This was "Poetry In Motion"! Beautiful imagery in tecnicolor!!!! I found myself swaying as I was reading. I was moving with the "liquid effect" this depicts. Yes, please do tell your inspiration for this! The title by itself is intriging! Why Saphire? Symbolism I detect in this Musical magic. Loved it! My favorite so far!!!! Write On!!!!! lol

    Kim aka painted Diary

    sagesweetwater Lesbian Novelist

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    This poem is entirely about phone sex. I actually wrote Liquid Light when I was very liquid. The humor is in "altering, enhancing," metaphor for a dildo, a girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do, gay or straight.
    it is easier to do it over the phone in digital whispers with the strobe light keeping rhythm with "the enhancement."
    equates to orgasm. The music midi accompanying this piece is "the dance of multi-orgasm." The music really takes you there...

    Ah...you're a priceless gem, Jacquii...deep blue for a deep thinker you are...


    Sage
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    true blue answer for a true blue question, Painted. Why Sapphire? It is the blue star-effect filter I put on the strobe to take me "there!" Let the "dance" begin! Don't you just love the sapphire power of metaphor?

    Sage
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Ah! It all makes sense now - Beautifully abstract tapestry of desire,
    hence the metaphoric euphorium such a pic evokes
    gasping from the ecstacy of pleasure.
    Simply pleasure!

    Beautiful write!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jul 27, 2006
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    Hello sagesweetwater

    I really loved this. I don't think I have ever seen anyone use the visual affect
    that you have here. I love the flow of this. You have great talent. Look forward to reading more from you......you got it go-in on

    michael


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    I liked your poem very very much, Sage. Your strong use of vocabulary is well utilized. I especially like how you express the inexpressible feelings of life. I'm not a judge so I'm not critiqing (speeling?) you. I'm telling you that I feel as though you have a good sense of characters and characterization. It comes through in your words.


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    Jeez Banned

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    Ah Sage,

    U'r always liquid,
    in mind, body and
    especially verse.


    Posted By Jeez | Aug 25, 2006
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    sagesweetwater Lesbian Novelist

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    GEEZ, Jeez! Good to see you here...my loyal fan! Thank you for the comment...Be well, Jeez...I have to look and see if you posted anything...

    Sage

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