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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    The dark side of life's poetry
    Is pleading to be read,
    Gasping breathless through the depths
    Of words that must be said.

    When shadows cloud the evening skies
    And mask their hidden choices,
    Emote the words when poets cry
    And listen to their voices.

    The dark side of life's poetry
    Can hardly be ignored,
    When written with intensity
    The verses are implored.

    Listen to their voices
    Written from the words of pain,
    Ardor the poet's bleeding heart
    As he bears his soul again.

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    wow we're seeing on the same plain today,
    in different rhytm though, cool poem

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Thank you erik:

    I thought I would write a poem through the mind of a emotional unhappy soul who is yearning for someone, anyone to feel their pain.
    Touching words that scream for help and comfort.
    I'm glad you liked it.

    Blessings

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    Wow....
    this is how i feel too.
    hehe, you wrote what I wanna say :wub:
    :]

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Thanks Mango:

    I figured this poem would grab some of the readers here. So many people can relate to this type of message.
    Thanks for commenting
    Blessings

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    wow...i mean WOW...what a great post...absolutely loved this one...quite possibly my favorite...the whole thing is wonderful...the words are so true...thanks for sharing this excellent work with us.


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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    You are indeed very welcome Scott:
    It's poets and readers like yourself that keeps me inspired and to improve in my poetry.

    I am happy that you loved this one. I strive very hard to bring the emotions out in the open and make people think.

    Thanks so much your comment is greatly appreciated.
    Blessings
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    Dear Sally,

    :wow: is an understatement! I felt this one for sure, and am in that poem. This was spot on in every word! The ingredients for this recipe will equate to so many poets. It did make me think, and it made me want to reach out and touch the computer screen, as if it has some magic connected with it. That is a great poem, with an affection factor of 1000! Thank you so much for posting this!

    Kim :)

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    You are very welcome Kim: :)
    I try to place myself into the minds of others when I write. And who can see themselves in my work.
    I think I did it with this one.
    I am glad to know that this message was strong enough to pull on everyones heartstrings.
    I strive to grab emotions from my readers.

    Blessings

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